Using Creative Writing Prompts in Language Learning

photo by Hussein Baomar

Meera Lee Patel just published a new book: Learn to Let Go: A Journal for New Beginnings so I want to post this essay about her (and Katie Daisy’s) work. Their texts are always very effective in helping students improve their writing. Reflecting on how students reacted so positively to their artwork/ writings made me want to help other teachers find the benefits in using non-traditional writing prompts.

Abstract

This article highlights the importance of using interesting writing prompts to help students reach their language goals. The article reviews academic texts on the importance of using writing prompts, then gives examples of different types and explains how different prompts can be used to reach a variety of teaching objectives such as writing argument papers, varying audiences, learning grammar rules and increasing vocabulary. Using creative prompts to promote co-writing and class discussions are also explored. Various types of creative workbooks by Daisy (2018) and Patel (2018) are used as examples of how pairing prompts with appealing visuals can help students write longer and better essays. The procedures and positive results of using prompts are also discussed. Specifically, the author has found that using prompts means less delay in students beginning to do in-class writings, as well as creating longer and more detailed texts.

keywords: Language learning, creativity, writing prompts, writing journals

Introduction

It might seem odd to be discussing creative writing texts in a scholarly text about language learning, but in order to increase proficiency students need to produce writing. Colorful, vibrant, engaging texts will draw students in and make writing more enjoyable. Further, having an interesting prompt will help students write more and create the need for new vocabulary.

The impetus for my research on the topic of using interesting texts to help promote language learning started in a bookstore over ten years as I was looking for a text to help me learn Arabic. There were four choices. The first was a huge, thick paperback, as I paged through I saw that the vocabulary list for the first chapter had over 40 words. It seemed overwhelming so I set it down. The next two books were A4-sized paperbacks with a grammar rule at the top of each page and then 10-15 lines to write practice sentences.

The fourth book was a small paperback filled with black and white cartoon drawings and a wide variety of exercise (matching, fill-in-the-blank, true-false, charts, etc.). I not only bought it, I worked my way through the entire book eventually completing every page. Then I went on to buy and finish three more books by the same authors (Wightwick and Gaafar 2021). The user-friendliness of that Arabic textbook with its cute drawings, diverse tasks, short vocabulary lists and student-appropriate vocabulary made it easy to motivate myself to study every week. The lessons were not just about grammar rules, but included realistic conversations and creative expression. Making learning fun was a key element to my continued learning.

When I create syllabi for writing classes such as Advanced Academic English, Advanced English Language, Culture in the Classroom, Psychology of Language, Situational English, Writing for the Professions and Writing Workshop I take my person experience into account and think about my students’ attitudes towards learning. Sometimes I might give a short piece of literature, a question, a quote or an interesting painting as a prompt.

The purpose of this paper is to explain the pedagogical background for using creative writing prompts and to give specific examples of texts that language teachers might use.

Review of literature

Creative Writing

There is wide-spread agreement increasing student’s access to and use of creative writing into the language classroom is useful. This is usually accomplished through using interesting speaking and writing prompts, as well as literature such as poems or stories.

For example, both the Oxford University Press and the British Council recommend using creative writing to help create effective lessons in the EFL classroom. In the article “7 ways to bring Creative Writing into the #EFL classroom” published on the Oxford University Press website, various teachers explain writing prompts that engage students. The ideas include giving student the first part of a story then having students write their own ending and giving a non-written stimulus, such as playing music and let students write their reaction.

On the British council website, Maley (n.d.) argues that creative writing “aids language development at all levels: grammar, vocabulary, phonology and discourse.” Further, “a key characteristic of creative writing is a willingness to play with the language.” Morissey (n.d) explains that “Most teachers would agree that what we want to say, what comes from the heart, we are happier to work on [and thus] Creative writing involves playful but rigorous work with language.” For example, “to say precisely what they mean, students have to be very careful in their use of vocabulary and idioms.”

The website TEFL UK, which offers on-line English teacher training classes, states that “Learning a language is a process that requires different types of activities to be involved for the student to truly progress…And, it’s the teacher’s job to make these activities as engaging and useful as possible” (6 Creative Writing Activities 2021).

Discussing motivation, Arshavskaya (2015) presents research that “suggests that creative writing assignments can serve as an important mediational tool that fosters greater motivation and engagement with writing” (75).

Further, Deveci (2020) argues that the “development of creativity in students will contribute to their personal triumphs and the economic and social development of their societies” (30). His research highlights four themes which show how students perceive themselves to be creative four (Originality, Problem-solving, Designing and Interest in learning). These are incorporated into writing using nine strategies:

  • Experience – using personal facts and historical information, having real, interesting, evidence
  • Lexis – using synonyms, simple words, attractive words, interesting words, varying registers, picking the right word
  • Language use – using good/perfect grammar, correct punctuation, no spelling mistakes, proofreading, using figurative language and rhetorical questions, writing that is not too simple, repetitive, long or complex, using a mixture of simple and complex sentences, avoiding long boring sentences
  • Familiarity with readers – knowing audience, reader interest areas, reader concerns, readers’ behavior and relevance to readers
  • Originality – using something new, out of ordinary, original ideas
  • Organization – linking ideas together, linking words, avoiding repetition of ideas/information
  • Length – not too long, not too detailed, enough information, focusing on relevant ideas
  • Voice – using the active voice, directed to reader, self
  • Detail – using specifics (34)

Language Learning and Literature

Talking about English language classrooms in Japan, Smith (2013) discusses how “students’ creative use of language, in particular in literary writing, may serve as an aid to certain aspects of language acquisition (particularly grammar and certain kinds of vocabulary)…Such tasks also appear to be motivating” (11). Celika, Mahmut, Violeta Dimovaa and Biljana Ivanovska (2012) make a similar point about using children’s literature in Macedonia classrooms.

Alsyouf (2020) contends that “Involving creative writing as a method to learn and teach languages in this regard can play a significant role in stimulating students to improve their communicative skills” (33). For example, he states that “Poetry…can function as a prolific source of vocabulary for the language of poetry appeals to the mind where it is easily memorised and from which it is smoothly retrieved” (35).

Similarly, Sinha (2017) argues that “Poetry can play a significant role in language learning in general and English poems can be used in the language classrooms for effective language learning for ELLs” (245). He explores “how contextualizing poetry teaching with a linguistically oriented model, with certain well-defined steps, offers an extensive variety of language learning opportunities” (245). The stages are

Step 1: Putting the poem in context

Step 2: Performing the poem

Step 3: Investigation of the title

Step 4: Progress through the poem

Step 5: Reading of the poem

Step 6: Profiling the poem linguistically

Step 7: Critical appreciation of a poem (245)

In terms of specific texts, Felemban (2012) makes the point that using the famous play The Importance of Being Ernest by Oscar Wilde allows students to increase communicative competence by understanding how to use polite expressions in English. Learning how to use words in realistic ways means that students can avoid “conflict and misunderstanding” (76). More examples can be found in Gardner’s (2023) article “Teaching Language Through Literature.”

Prompts

In Best’s essay about “How to Teach Creative Writing” (2020), the first two steps for inspiring students to write are are “Create inspiring and original prompts” and “Unpack the prompts together.”[1] Daskalovska and Dimova (2012) state that “If learners are to be encouraged to participate in a conversation in the classroom, they should be given a meaningful content that will provoke their interest, capture their imagination and give them something important to talk about” (1182).

As the scholarly agreement is clear that good prompts are important, the issue becomes: which texts to use? There are two kinds of texts which are beneficial for language teachers. One is a straight-forward book written for classrooms such as Yeh and O’Reilly’s Creative Writing: A Workbook with Readings (2022). Similarly, Thorpe’s Teaching Creative Writing to Second Language Learners (2021) has chapters which include: Brainstorming, Dialogue, Word Choice, Digital Composition and Editing, all of which would be useful in any language classroom.

A second type of text is not written for a classroom, but has a lot of benefits for teachers such as Daisy’s How to Be a Wildflower (2013) and Patel’s Made Out of Stars (2018). These books are classified as self-expression journals meaning there are blank pages with decorations around the edges so that the reader can write out responses to the vividly illustrated quotes and questions.

A key element of these type of journals is that they engage students who are less verbally focused. For example, in How to Be a Wildflower (2013), there is the quote “Afoot and light-hearted I take to the open road, healthy, free, the world before me” (16). The words are written on a page with a painting of a road vanishing into the distance with fields with flowers and trees on either side. A student who might be intimidated or unsure when faced with an empty page can take ideas from the illustration.

When looking for journals, teachers need to be be careful that the book fits within their students’ culture. For example, Kelly’s True You (2020) has an emphasis on personal issues such as spirituality might not be appropriate for some classrooms.

Method

In this section, I discuss various methods and procedures for helping students produce interesting writings which can be used as foundation texts for language learning such as student journals, interesting prompts and creative workbooks.

Journals

Student journals might seem better suited for creative writing classes, but I have used journals for non-fiction writing classes such as Writing Workshop and Writing for the Professions. Each student has to bring an A4, lined book and for the first 10 minutes of class, they do free-writing based on a prompt I give to the class.

Having all their writing collected in one place means that there is always writing at hand which can serve as a springboard for lessons. For example, I can ask students to take their free writing and turn it from first person to third person, from present tense to past tense, to add an adjective to every noun, etc.

Writing prompts

Best (2020) suggests using the following prompts:

  • personal memories (“Write about a person who taught you an important lesson”)
  • imaginative scenarios
  • lead-in sentences (“I looked in the mirror and I couldn’t believe my eyes. Somehow overnight I…”).
  • Show a thought-provoking image with a directive (e.g. show a photo of a wooden cabin and ask “Who do you think lives in this mountain cabin? Describe their life”).

Some of the prompts I use with classes are:

  • Look out the window, describe what you see
  • If you could only take 5 things from your room, what would you take and why?
  • What is the perfect picnic lunch?
  • Describe someone who is trying to get something in a sneaky way
  • Describe someone who is trying to give advice and the other person is not listening
  • If you could make one wish come true for someone else, who would you give the wish to and what would you wish for?
  • Describe a person you know by describing the person’s room
  • Describe a person you know by describing how the person walks and one object the person has (car, purse, book bag, computer, etc.)
  • Pretend you suddenly jump 5 years ahead in your life – write what you are doing/ what your life is like in the future

As the first step for students who will write argument essays, I use prompts such as

  • Explain something that you learned over the semester break (how to do something, why not to do something, that a person is better or worse than you had thought, etc.)
  • Write about a time when you thought you were right, but it turned out that you were wrong, or a time when you were right and everyone else was wrong
  • Describe a person who you respected more than you should have, or a person who you respected less than you should have
  • Describe something that should change to make your home town better
  • Pretend you are the chief architect and explain why a building on campus should be moved to a different location, or why a municipal building such as the airport or a hospital should be in a different location

Prompts for creative writing include:

  • If you breakfast/ shoes/ desk could talk to you, what would it say?
  • Write a lullaby to something that is NOT a child
  • Describe your life if you lived on the moon
  • Imagine you are writing with something other than a pen/pencil such as a vegetable, a fish or lipstick, what would you choose and what kind of story will you write?
  • If you planted your heart, what would grow?
  • Describe a person using animal metaphors
  • If you could be any animal, which animal would you be and why?

The benefit of these kind of prompts is that they can be modified to meet the needs of different classes. For example, some teachers might find the questions “If you could be any animal, which animal would you be and why?” too low-level for their class. They might try one of these variations: “What animal do you think should disappear from the Earth?,” “What animal should be found in every country?,” “What extinct animal should be brought back to life?” If the students are studying in a foreign country, the teacher can ask “What animal from your country do you miss the most?,” “What animal from your country should be brought here?” or “What animal from this country should be brought back to your country?”

The same type of questions can work with topics such as houses or clothing and can be scaled up or down in view of the students’ level. Writing about a favorite piece of clothing can work for lower-level student using basic vocabulary such colors. Students who are the the intermediate level can use the same question but focus on adjectives of texture (fuzzy, itchy, ironed, lumpy, rough, etc.), material (cotton, leather, linen, silk, wool, etc.) and technique (knitted, quilted, woven, etc.).  Higher level students can work with more descriptive words such as embroidered, nubby, pleated, puffy, ruffled and shimmering.

Questions about non-controversial topics such as food and gardens can lead to expanding vocabulary choices, such as descriptions of slimy, rubbery okra and soggy, syrupy pancakes. When describing their dream garden, students can practice or learn words such as bud, bloom, cobblestones, graveled, paved, prickly, wilted and withered.

All of these prompts create the need for new vocabulary/ expressions and can be expanded into longer pieces of writing. For example, a question about an animal can lead to students writing a description of the animal, its habitat and what it eats, a story about seeing the animal, etc. Teachers also might ask students switch their writing with another student, who can then attempt to add to or ask questions about what is already written.

Co-writing and discussion prompts

Another type of prompt is when two students are asked to write together to produce a dialog which might be realistic such as, write a discussion between two people who have not seen each other in a long time and one person has changed a lot. Some dialogs might be unrealistic such as write out a conversation with a famous person. Another idea is to give students a specific setting, such as write a dialog in a kindergarten, a flower store, on a rainy beach, etc.

If the goal of the lesson is verbal, not written, production teachers can ask for oral responses to prompts, see for example Kaivola, Salomaki & Taina (2012) for a discussion about how working together enriches language learning.

Some of the prompts I use to start conversations include:

  • Is it better to grow up or to be a child forever?
  • If you could have any ‘super power’ (fly, be invisible, to breathe under water…) which would you want to have and why? What would you do?
  • What award for “Best…” would you like to get? i.e. Best Smile, Best Shoes, Best Friend, Best Tea-making, etc.

For students in their teens and early twenties, asking their opinion about their education is usually a good way to get people talking:

  • Should kids under the age of 10 have homework?
  • Should art and music be mandatory at high schools?
  • Should your school have tests every month or only midterms/ finals?
  • Should your school have a requirement for a third foreign language?
  • What times should high schools start? What should be the time of the first (earliest) class at your school?
  • What should be the school colors or mascot for your university?
  • Should you stay friends with someone made a mistake and told someone your secret?

Older students might be more interested in questions that relate to their lives:

  • Are there times when it is ok to lie?
  • Is talent or hard work more important?
  • Should you invite foreign people to your house for dinner?
  • Should you invite people from other countries to your family’s weddings?
  • Should people be forced to use their real names on social media?
  • Should there be a minimum age for women to marry?
  • Should every large business have a day care?
  • Should parents hit their children if they misbehave?

Creative workbooks

I find creative workbooks to be very useful, for example Daisy’s How to Be a Wildflower (2016) and The Wildflower’s Workbook (2018), as well as Patel’s Start Where You Are (2015) and Made Out of Stars (2018). The titles might appear non-academic, but they are valuable resources for language teachers. First, the texts use a variety of colors so they are attractive to look at and catch students’ attention. But the hues are bright, not pastel, and the illustrations are vivid, not cutesy, so students don’t feel that they are working with a children’s book.

The variety of the pages mean that students don’t get bored and the variety of prompts mean that teachers always have a way to connect student writing to a language lesson. For example, a dark blue page with stars and the instruction “take a walk at twilight” can lead into a lesson on giving commands, or the words for different times of day or writing comparisons such as “during the day…, but during the night….”. Pages with a well-crafted quote such “There they stand, the innumerable stars, shining in order like a living hymn written in light” by N. P. Willis as can lead into a discussion of the importance of the repetitions of sound, an easy way to teach alliteration.

In addition to the books, there are also decks of cards with illustrations and quotes which are very also helpful, for example, Daisy’s How to Be a Moonflower Deck (2023). This has 78, 4 by 6 inch cards which are printed on heavy paper; each card has an illustration with a quote or instruction. Thus instead of telling students to go to a specific page, you can ask students to pick the card they like. As the cards are in a variety of colors such as grey, pinks, blues, green and violets, students can take one that interests them.

Seeing a card illustrated with a full moon and blue/grey flowers can lead into students writing about a trip they took at night or hypotheticals questions such as “Would you like to travel to the moon, why or why not”?” or “Imagine there is something living on the moon, what is it and what does it look like?”

Students bring photos

Another way to spark ideas is to use student-generated objects as writing prompts. For example, ask each student to bring in 2 or 3 large, interesting photos, printed from the web or from a magazine. Collect the photos and then hand them out again so that each student has new pictures in front for them. Depending on the language goals for that lesson, you can ask students to describe what they see, make a dialog about the image, create a story that takes place in the picture, etc. An easy way to work on verbal skills is to have one student describe the image out loud without letting anyone see the picture, while other students try to draw the image following the explanation.

Procedure

For all of these methods, my system is the same. At the start of class, students settle down and open their writing journals. I say the writing prompt aloud and ask if the students understand. I wait a moment for them to start writing and walk around the room to see if anyone is confused. Then I sit quietly at the front of the class and take attendance. If anyone comes in late, I walk over to them and tell them the prompt.

After the ten minutes, I use their writing as a basis for the lesson. For example, if it is the beginning of the semester with lower-level students, I can use a simple prompt such as

“Look out the window, describe what you see.” Then I might talk about using all five senses. I ask them what the five senses are, write them on the board and ask which senses they included in their description. Next I ask them to try to add on some sentences to make sure they have descriptions of sound, taste, smell, feel and sight.

In the same way, if the prompt was “Pretend you suddenly jump 5 years ahead in your life – write what you are doing/ what your life is like in the future.” I would ask students what topics they covered and write their ideas on the board, such as their house, their job, their family, where they have traveled to, etc. Then I ask student to add in details to enhance their descriptions. Thus a student who only wrote about their future family might add in information about their house and vacations.

With more advanced students I can ask them to expand their writing by adding, for example a dialog which gives me the chance to teach how to write a conversation using quote marks. This can make the explanation of “Write about a time when you thought you were right, but it turned out that you were wrong, or a time when you were right and everyone else was wrong” more interesting.

I collect the writing journals two or three times during the semester and give a grade on overall amount of writing with a rubric so students know what is required (see Appendix A for an example).

Results

Teacher Perceptions

It is sometimes difficult to tease out exactly why students’ writing improves. For my writing classes, I always see clear improvement in amount and quality of writing when I give interesting writing prompts. But I can’t go so far as to say the prompts are the only reason students show progress in language learning. What I can claim is that with good prompts, students dive quickly into their writing. I don’t have students asking to go to the bathroom, trying to talk to another student, writing off-topic, staring at the walls or doodling. The first, sometimes biggest, hurdle of getting that first sentence down is easily passed. Prompts which catch students’ attention encourage them to write their ideas, while much-used prompts such as “is driving fast dangerous?” “is fast-food healthy” or “is smoking bad for you?” lead to rote, uninteresting essays.

When I collect writing journals, I can see how student’s ability to produce correct sentences improves quickly over time. For a Writing Workshop in Fall 2023, students needed to write five types of essays: personal story, opinion, comparison, analysis and argument. Every class (except exams) started with a non-fiction prompt of the type listed above and 10 minutes of silent writing.

Student X wrote 7 sentences in response to the prompt of the first day of class. After 2 months, they were writing 14 or more sentences. Student Y started at 1 paragraph and was writing 3 paragraphs within 2 months. Student Z had one run-on sentence on the first day and 8 sentences within a month.

Sometimes the improvement is not in the amount, but the organization. On the first day of class, Student 1 wrote 5 sentences, one of which was 12 lines long. Within a month that student’s writing for one day had 3 paragraphs, with 3, 4 and 3 correct sentences respectively.

In a creative writing course in Spring 2023, on the first day I introduced the topic of writing a poem, student A wrote an 8-line poem in ten minutes. After a month, they wrote a 14-line poem in the same time span. The same results occurred with all students, e.g. student B went from 3 lines to 11 lines. Student C went from 4 lines to 10 lines and student D went from 5 lines to 23 lines.

In the same class, for the non-fiction task of doing a detailed, creative description of a person or place, student A wrote one run-on sentence on the first day of the unit. After a month, they wrote 5 short sentences. Student B went from 6 sentences on the first day to 18 sentences on the last day. Student C day went from 4 sentences to 12 sentences; student D went from 4 sentences to 16 sentences.

Learning to compose first, correct later helps get students over the fear of producing writing in the target language. Having ten sentences and editing that down to six is much easier than trying to write six perfect sentences. And having a topic they have a strong opinion on such as “Should your school have tests every month or only midterms/ finals?” means that they are more willing to risk speaking.

Another result of using creative writing prompts is that there is a larger chance that students will do their own work. When prompts are closely tailored for your class, students can’t find anything similar on-line and might even have trouble coming up with AI answers. For example, there are hundreds of on-line samples of essays to respond to: “Should university students have to wear a uniform?” But you can’t find one that answers: “If you suddenly became an Omani animal, which animal would you change into?”

Student Perceptions   

Students’ responses to prompts are generally positive. When I asked 20 former students to fill out a simple, anonymous questionnaire (see Appendix B), every response about writing prompts included words such as “helpful,” beneficial” and “useful.”  These were all third- or fourth year female students who had taken a writing class and/ or a literature class with me.

In answering the question “Do you think it’s better to have a teacher give writing prompts or not? Explain your ideas,” a student wrote, “a teacher gives students writing prompts helps guide students into writing, especially considering that the students may lack creativity.” Another wrote, prompts “help me to have a starting point, this also helps me organize my writing.”

In reply to “Do you think the writing prompts helped you to become a better writer – why or why not?” one student wrote, “yes, because prompts are like the starting point that triggers our writing process to improve.” Another student explained, “they helped me in broadening my perspective, especially when it comes to saying my opinions. This helped me do better in my other courses as well.”

Reacting to the example prompts I listed on the questionnaire, students wrote favorably, for example “they will push the student to look-up new vocabulary” and “they will improve his/ her skills to write or talk about new subjects, that are out of their comfort zone.”

When given the option of which was better for students: the writing prompts I gave or “more serious ones such as: describe your day, write about a vacation you took, is eating at a restaurant healthy?” one student wrote, “I like the above [the ones I gave], because if a student writes about serious topics it will be like memorizing things; it doesn’t develop the sense of creativity and sharing ideas with others.” Another answer was that my examples are “mostly useful, they help us improve our writing by writing on new subjects.”[2]

About using writing journals, students were also positive. In response to the question, “Did you like using a Writing Journal – why or why not?” students wrote ““Yes, because it is basically a practice to write daily and find different ideas about different things,” “Yes, it helped a lot in my other classes,” and “Yes, I learned a new writing style.” For the second question, “Do you think it’s better to have OR not have a writing journal? Explain your ideas,” one student said, “I think it’s better to have a writing journal because it helps us be more organized.” Another student wrote, “I think it’s better to have a writing journal because it develops the sense of creativity and gives us a place to express ourselves and organize our ideas.”

Discussion

As I have argued elsewhere (Risse 2023, 2020, 2019) learning goes smoothly when teachers meet students halfway by creating interesting activities that match students’ levels and interests. In reply to my question “Do you think the writing prompts helped you to become a better writer – why or why not?” one student wrote, “coming up with a new idea can be a bit difficult at the beginning of the writing.” Another student echoed this idea by saying, “students who lack creativity need prompts to help sort their thoughts.”

Further, it can difficult and/ or boring to explain grammar and composition rules with an unexciting model. But if you ask: “If you planted your heart, what would grow?” you can get a paragraph students will enjoy writing and you will be interested to read. That prompt can lead to a lesson on prepositions, e.g. you put your heart in the ground, cover it with soil, give it water from a pot. The same prompt can be used to explain the passive voice, e.g. I planted my heart; my heart was planted. It can also be used to explain the subjunctive mood, e.g. If I planted my heart, then a peach tree would grow.

Whatever I need to teach, it’s easier when students who have a topic they are invested in. For a low-level student describing “their perfect picnic lunch” gives them a chance to ask about words that they want to use. They are not interacting with a pre-planned list of colors; they are trying to figure out the specific colors they need for the food they picked. This puts them in control of their language learning

Teaching students how to write for a specific audience can be tricky as they need to construct a hypothetical reader. When I give a prompt such as “explain why a building on campus should be moved to a different location,” we can talk about how their writing will change if they are talking to other students or to the administration.

For me, the best part about using creative prompts is that I can sometimes reach tuned-out students as I can easily adopt a prompt to find something they want to talk about. If I hand out a Wildflower card saying, “write a conversation with the plant or animal” and an unhappy student responds, “I don’t want to talk to a tree.” I can say, “Well, the tree also does not want to be in this classroom. So where do you and the tree want to go?” If a student responds, “I want to be in a race car.” I can say, “Perfect! Write about taking the tree on a fast ride in a Formula I car, how is the tree going to like that?” Instead of a standard text about “a car I like,” the student has to expand their ideas in a new way: how will a tree fit into their favorite car?

Conclusion

A few years ago at a university Open Day, I was staffing a booth that had examples of students’ writing. A person walked by, picked up one of the poems, read it, then asked me, “Did the student write this or did you give them a prompt?” I said that I gave a prompt and they tossed it back on the table with a dismissive gesture and walked on.

That person, and some educators, think that students should come up with their own topics.         Yet in reply to my question “Do you think the writing prompts helped you to become a better writer – why or why not?” one student wrote, “Yes, because coming up with a new idea can be difficult but the writing prompts are there giving me the whole idea of what I am going to write about which helps a lot becoming a better writer.”

That student’s opinion summarizes my point of view perfectly. I don’t think it’s effective to say to language learners: “Write something!”  Interesting writing prompts help students to take steps towards using their target language in ways that are meaningful to them. If they are faced with a question they want to answer, students will try to find the vocabulary, expressions and grammar points to convey what they want to say. Depending on the students’ level, a good prompt can result in a few sentences or a few paragraphs which can be the basis of many types of lessons to help language learners reach their goals.

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Appendix A

Example of Grading Rubric for Journal with Responses to Writing Prompts

Writing Workshop – Rubric for Writing Journal – 10 points

Assignment first check – 3 points second –3 points third –4 points  
large-sized notebook 
only for Writing Workshop class 
date at the top of every page 
at least 1/2 page of writing for each class – even if you were absent  
name on the LAST page of journal 
rubric (this sheet) included on front page of journal 
grade  total
It is ok to:• make mistakes in your writing, the journal is for free-writing and drafts

• use colors

• write more than 1/2 page

 

 

Appendix B

Student Survey About Writing Prompts

Your Opinion about Writing Journals and Writing Prompts

Examples of Writing Prompts

Engl 285 – Writing Workshop

  • Write something you learned over the semester break
  • Write about a time when you learned that you were wrong/ vice versa
  • Write about a time you were stupidly not scared, or scared without reason
  • Write about when someone respected you more than you deserved or vice versa
  • Give advice to someone younger/ older/ your age
  • You have the power to move a building to new place (the university, airport, etc.) what you move and why?

Engl 320 – Introduction to Creative Writing

  • Your purse is talking to you, what does it say?
  • What do you want to take with you from your home/ town?
  • students bring in objects in their favorite color – students bring in interesting photos
  • Write about someone trying to cover a mistake
  • What would happen if you became any animal or bird or fish or you had a ‘super power’ (fly, be invisible, etc.)

Engl 315 – The Novel

  • Opinion of a character: Begin with “I like…” or “I do not like…”
  • Compare a character in a story and yourself or someone you know
  • Compare what we are reading to another story or movie
  • Write a different beginning to the novel or a chapter/ Guess what happens next
  • Discuss the text with another person
  • Write a scene from another character’s point of view

Do you think it’s better to have OR not have a writing journal? Explain your ideas.

Do you think it’s better to have a teacher give writing prompts or not? Explain your ideas.

Do you think teachers should give writing prompts like above or more serious ones such as: describe your day, write about a vacation you took, is eating at a restaurant healthy?

If you took a class with Dr. Risse:   write the course name or course number__________

Did you like using a Writing Journal – why or why not?

Do you think using a writing journal helped you improve your writing, why or why not?

Do you think the writing prompts helped you to become a better writer – why or why not?

[1] The following steps are: Writing warm-ups, Start planning, Producing rough drafts, Sharing drafts for peer feedback and Editing (Best 2020).

[2] I asked students to mark out the prompts that they thought were the most interesting.  The most frequently listed were:

Engl 285 – Writing Workshop

    • A time you were stupidly not scared, or scared without reason
    • A time when someone respected you more than you deserved or vice versa
    • You have the power to move a building to new place (the university, airport, etc.) what you move and why?

Engl 320 – Introduction to Creative Writing

    • Your purse is talking to you, what does it say?
    • What do you want to take with you from your home/ town?
    • You became any animal or bird or fish or you have a ‘super power’ (fly, be invisible, etc.)

Engl 315 – The Novel

    • Compare a character in a story and yourself or someone you know
    • Write a different beginning to the novel or a chapter/ Guess what happens next
    • Discuss the text with another person
    • Write a scene from another character’s point of view

Using Cultural Understandings to Improve Teaching, part 1

Selected Fiction (Novels and Short Stories) – Arabian Peninsula

Teaching: Reflections on Culture Shocks

Researching and Working on the Arabian Peninsula: Creating Effective Interactions

Culture Shock – Communication is Always the Worst Part (Don’t Lie), part 2

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MIT – “the nicest of geniuses” – explaining

MIT – “the nicest of geniuses” – knowing the world

MIT – “the nicest of geniuses” – being pleasant and helpful

MIT decided to partner with the company gapingvoid for a series of whimsical drawings with sayings that distill MIT Sloan School of Management’s cultural frameworks, one of which is “We hang out with the nicest of geniuses.”

That might seem a little self-serving, but I worked at MIT for 5 years (2 1/2 years at Sloan and 2 1/2 years in the Office of the Dean, School of Engineering) before I went to Oman. When I moved back to the States, I returned to Sloan.

The “genius” part is justified by the awards given to people who work at MIT; the “nicest” part is justified by the MIT expectation that the more important the position held, the kinder the demeanor. When I came back to Sloan in Sept. 2024, I had not worked in the States in 19 years. I had a lot of catching up to do and, during my first weeks, I often bothered my boss with basic questions and I always got a serene explanation, no “just look it up” or “ask X.” The person with the least spare time is the person most willing to walk me through the details I need to know.

But my stronger example comes from my previous job in the School of Engineering. I did stewardship which means explaining to donors what was done with their money, i.e., asking professors who were given funds for their labs to write (or have me write) a letter back to the donor.

When I started that job, I was a little nervous going into the office of world-rated, much-decorated, famous professors to ask them to write a letter in lay-man’s terms for their donors, but what I found is that every single academic was able to say what they were doing in a simple and straightforward way without condescension or impatience.

After I would tell them why I wanted a letter about their work, they would usually ask, “Do you have a background in…” whatever their field of engineering was. I would shake my head and say, “I was an English Lit major.” They would nod and start in on a cognizant explanation. Every letter they wrote included both gratitude for the gift to MIT and a clear description of how they money furthered important research.

The visual metaphor I have is someone standing lost on the ground floor of a building with a large atrium. There is a crowd of people up on the 10th floor balcony, trying to tell the lost person where to go. Some point; some yell, “Go to the East 6 cubits, then turn South for 18 cubits.” Some hold up their phone saying. “Here are the directions” and others yell, “It’s easy! What is your problem?” And then there is the person who walks to the elevator, goes down to the ground floor, walks up to the person and says, “Please follow me.”

MIT hires the people who go to the elevator.

Practicalities: Managing a Short Research Trip to the Arabian Peninsula

Practicalities of Moving to the Arabian Peninsula: Using the Arabic Language

Practicalities of Moving to the Arabian Peninsula: Dealing with Loss

One Year Away – Missing Oman

Me Talk Pretty Never: Learning Arabic, part 2

Me Talk Pretty Never: Learning Arabic, part 1

The first authentic (not classroom) Arabic I understood was in a grocery store: an Omani man asked a clerk “wayn shokolata?” (where’s the chocolate?). I think it was very fitting that my first identification involved candy. It is also fitting that there wasn’t a verb.

Arabic is the fourth foreign language I have studied and, given that I am dyslexic and didn’t really start learning it until I was 42 years old, I am stuck at an odd mix of linguistic abilities. I have inadvertently created my own pidgin.

I know hundreds of Arabic nouns. From teaching literature and metaphors, I know colors, animals, birds and geographical features, but I never remember the words for parts of the body such as arm, foot and ears. I know “eyes” because you need it for metaphors of love, but I have no idea about nose or fingers. I know many words for furniture, types of food, rooms in the house and clothes, but I don’t know the word for “fork.”

I know pronouns and lots of adjectives and thank heavens you don’t need the verb “to be” for basic Arabic sentences: just give a pronoun or noun and a modifier: I happy/ he sick

I can rarely conjugate the verbs ‘to go’ and ‘come’ as fast as I need them so I make do with a pronoun, preposition, noun and time-markers: I to store yesterday. It’s incorrect but I can make myself understood in most situations.

After I had been in Oman for 7 years, I paid for an intensive, 6-week, Arabic language summer school in Muscat. All the students lived in an apartment building and took the bus to school every morning – it was like being in summer camp.

When I got back to Dhofar, the first time I met the research guys I ended up (I can’t remember why) explaining the story of Joseph from the Bible. It was the first time I could do an extended story in Arabic and from then on, I gained more and more confidence telling stories and having long conversations and arguments. I paid for another 4-week Arabic language program at the same school the following year and solidified my low intermediate status.

Now I can talk for hours in Arabic with the research guys, but our communication has aspects of a personal language. For example the verb for “talk” has the root of t-k-l-m, and I grasped that as tatakeleum not conjugated, not inflected for gender or tense – whenever I needed to express anything to do with speech, I throw in that word and they extrapolate the meaning.

And then there is learning in the opposite direction, when you are a native speaker of English on the Arabian Peninsula, you are always relearning your own language. When I bought a slice of “coffee cake” I was surprised that it tasted like… coffee. “Coffee cake” is not supposed to taste like coffee; it’s supposed to taste like butter-sugar-flour-eggs-cinnamon.

When female students said: “My mister told me” I assumed they meant husband or father, but they meant teacher. And I had to grit my teeth at being called “Miss,” not “Miss” with my last name, just “Miss.”

And I had to reexplain English to my students, such as the fact that that they could not use the fun cuss words they heard in movies and songs in the classroom. It was so amusing when a shy, quiet student who never wanted to speak in class would yell “#&*)!” when their books slid off the desk. “No,” I would say shaking my head, “you can’t say that at the university.”

We also a lot of time delineating bear/ bare – profit/ prophet – fair/ fare – merry/ marry/ Mary. I clarify that “I’m sorry” in English means “I am not happy to hear your bad news”; in Arabic it means “I am entirely responsible for the negative event that occurred.” So in English if you tell me your father is sick, I say “I’m sorry” but if I say that to someone in Dhofar they will respond, “Why? You don’t make him ill.” And “How are you?” in English means “I am not planning to slap you in the next five minutes,” not “please tell me all the details of your life.”

But with all my efforts to translation words and meanings, I am often happy to have a language barrier. Sitting in cafés amidst a swirl of languages is relaxing; I don’t have to focus on what someone else is talking about. On picnics, the research guys chat in Gibali, and I could just admire the stars. A few times one of them would offer to teach me Gibali, but an unwritten language is a bridge too far for me.

Adjusting to Oman: My Dangerous Taxi

New Essay: “Ṭâ Is For Talisman” on The Arabic Alphabet website

Practicalities: Managing a Short Business Trip to the Arabian Peninsula

Bibliography for ‘Researching and Working on the Arabian Peninsula’ (2025, Palgrave Macmillan)

Me Talk Pretty Never: Learning Arabic, part 1

My favorite depiction of language learning is in the movie The 13th Warrior. Antonio Banderas’ character, Ahmad ibn Fadlan, picks up Old Norse in a matter of weeks by merely listening. Once he understands the words, he begins speaking fluently with conjugated verbs and perfect accent! I wish it were that easy!

I started learning French in middle school, then switched to German in high school. After I got my BA in German literature, I started on Ancient Greek when I was doing my PhD. After graduation, I got a teaching job at a new university in the Emirates.

During the weeks before I moved to Sharjah, I sat in cafés in Bethesda, Maryland practicing my Arabic letters in a beginner’s language book. Sipping lattes and writing out the shapes in my new calligraphy pen, I felt like I was quite the woman of the world.

During my first year of teaching in the Emirates, it was all I could do to keep up with my own students, but at the start of the second year I was part of a group of expat faculty and staff who requested that the administration create an Arabic class for us. I gradually realized, as we jumped through hoop after hoop, that no one wanted the expats to learn Arabic. English was for whatever needed to be said in public; the real decisions were made in Arabic.

We finally got a Westerner who knew Arabic to teach us and we soldiered on twice a week at lunch time for 4 or 5 months. I could transliterate, say simple phrases and bargain in stores but not do anything really useful.

I went back to the States for a few years, then returned to the Middle East. The first semester I was in Oman, I was simply surviving and getting over my culture shock, then I finally got to the point where I was ready to start learning Arabic again. There was an official class but the teacher was not very pleasant, so I asked a Lebanese co-worker if we could met once a week for lessons.

He was a kind man but it took a long time to find the right level for me. He started me on children’s stories without diacritics. Short Arabic vowels are not written as a letter but as a small mark above or below the consonant it is pared with; in regular writing such as in a newspaper, you will see “ktb” and if you don’t know the word, you can’t know if it is kataba, kitibi, kutubu, katibu, kituba, etc. I would sound out the consonants painfully slowly, then make random guesses as to the consonants. Total speculation.

He finally moved to an easier children’s book with diacritics: the mean mouse and the friendly turtle who rescued him. But it was rough going. And at the end of the semester the professor moved away.

In the fall, another American woman happened to remark that she had studied Arabic. “Can you teach me?” I asked and I started my next attempt. She had a young son who she was trying to teach Arabic to, so it worked out well; she would read him baby books in Arabic, then hand them off to me to struggle through. It is amazing to work out a language from the beginning, like a child. Amazing meaning, of course, frustrating.

I am a grown woman. I have navigated foreign countries and unruly students; I have a car and an IRA, and what is that papa hedgehog saying to baby hedgehog – ‘come here’ or ‘I will come’? Is that a past tense verb or a preposition? Where’s the vowel? I read with perfect interest and concentration about Shelly the Shell who got a grain of sand stuck in her mouth, would she recover? Why is that squirrel crying? Will the frog help her friend the turtle turn over? If the painter put blue over the cat’s yellow leg, what would happen? Drama! Tension!

I was happy to pay for the teaching and many Arabic children’s books, but I was always hoping to find a class so I could learn with other students.

One chance was an Arabic class that was offered at a local language school. I went to the first meeting which was difficult as I kept getting stuck in cultural chasms. Most of the other students were expat teachers so they kept articulating their needs (I would like interactive speaking exercises, I would like to have graduated listening activities, etc.) but our Arabic teacher had never taught before, so it was unlikely that they would understand, much less be able to produce what the students wanted.

The second issue was the choice of vocabulary. When our teacher asked us what expressions did we want to know, I said, “You are a brilliant student!” The woman next to me said with scorn, “Oh, you just want someone to say that to you!”

I thought, most of us are teachers, wouldn’t we want to have something positive to say to our students? But no one else was interested in being positive. We did not  learn “please” or “thank you”; we learned third person commands: “Sit! stand up! read! repeat! listen!” as if we were in a dog-training class. We did learn, “Excuse me” but only because one expat wanted to know how to say, “Get out of my way!”

The third issue was the teaching style. During the third class, the teacher presented us with a list of 16 sentences in Arabic. He read them aloud, then we had to put the sentences in the correct order to make a conversation. As I was working on it, I asked him the meaning of one word. He said, “You can figure it out” and said the word slowly.

I said, “No, I don’t know that word, can you please tell me?” As the teacher was fluent in English, I knew that he knew the meaning.

He repeated the word again in Arabic and I said, “I am sorry – repeating it doesn’t help, I don’t understand, could you please just tell me in English what this word means?”

He said, “If you think about it, you will get it.”

I said, “This is not really effective. I am lost here, can you please tell me what this word means?”

He said it again in Arabic.

I didn’t return to that class, but I eventually found an Arabic language summer school to attend, and with the help of Jane Wightwick and Mahmoud Gaafar’s books, I got to a low intermediate level.

Me Talk Pretty Never: Learning Arabic, part 2

Practicalities of Moving to the Arabian Peninsula: Using the Arabic Language

New essay: “’Ayn is for Arab” on “The Arabic Alphabet” website (by Michael Beard)

Selected Books on Dhofar in Arabic

One Year Away – Missing Oman

Geography is Destiny: Growing up in Columbia, Maryland

I grew up in a model city. This does not mean I turned out as a model citizen but my city, Columbia, Maryland, did the best it could. [see also Michael Chabon’s essay on Columbia, “Maps and Legends” in his essay collection with the same title]

Columbia came from a conglomeration of pieces of land bought up by under the direction of James Rouse for the Howard Company Research and Development Corporation. The area, between Baltimore and Washington D.C, was at that time mainly farm land; Rouse planned a “new city” which was supposed to create the feel of a small town but with housing available to people with all ranges of income.

Columbia was founded in 1967 and was built to seem small and friendly. It had curving roads, sidewalks, walking paths, artificial lakes, lots of trees and a “village centers” that would be within walking distance of most of the houses. Each village center was a mixed-use area with a community space/ theater, small stores and a large grocery store as well as restaurant and other amenities such as a library. Schools were also located within walking distances of most housing. All this was gilded with a patina of poetic names. I lived on ‘Open Sky,’ next to ‘Thicket Lane,’ ‘May Wind Court,’ ‘Green Mountain Circle’ and ‘Twin Rivers.’ People from nearby towns called Columbia “Disneyland” in the beginning years.

The idea of creating a community was incorporated into even the smallest detail. Mail was not delivered to houses. To get our mail, we walked across the street to a large box which had cubbyholes for 20 houses. The idea was that you would meet and talk to your neighbors as you picked up the mail every day.

The three main differences between Columbia and most other developments were that Columbia was deliberately built to bring people from different incomes together into the same space. Every village had single-family homes, townhouses, apartments, condominiums and subsidized housing. Thus every school had students from a wide-range of financial backgrounds.

A second difference is that religious buildings were forbidden. There were “interfaith centers” in each village center; each religious groups using the space at different times, i.e. Baptists at nine, Methodists at eleven. Lastly, the Columbia Medical Plan (CMP), an early form of HMO, was set up for residents so that most residents went to the same hospital.

The motto of Columbia is “People Power” and the power came from people who wanted to live in a “willed community,” meaning the people who bought homes there wanted to have neighbors from all economic, social, religious and national backgrounds. In middle school my best friend was from Haiti; in high schools my group of friends included people who were Jewish, Catholic, Hindi, Protestant and atheist.

The crowning touch was that I went through a ‘model’ school system. My elementary, middle and high schools were built ‘open plan’ – no classroom walls. Teachers used flimsy dividers to block off their own area. Students sat in semi-circles; the teachers sat on their desk or roamed around the space. There was always noise from other nearby classes; I enjoyed the setup but it must have been hell for those with ADHD.

The teachers were encouraged to be innovative and let students learn using a variety of methods. In elementary we learned math by using counting sticks. In high school we could work our way through math books at our own pace. We didn’t have lectures in English classes. There were about 45 ‘packets’ – each with a reading assignment and questions to answer. Each student had to do 12 packets in one year. If you powered though, you could finish in one semester, or languish on for 1 ½ years.

My last year, I had a very hip teache, who decided to let me and another student watch THX1138, George Lucas’ first film, a dystopia sci-fi short movie. The teacher wrote up a series of questions and we wrote essays to answer them, a far cry from the usual high school curriculum in 1986. Another teacher was doing research on ‘learning styles.’ My two best friends and I announced that we learned better sitting comfortably, so we appropriated the sofa which had been brought into his class space. We ‘needed’ the sofa to optimize our learning capabilities.

Despite the luxuries I was enjoying, my mom suggested that I finish high school in three years. I looked into it and found I would only need to take one summer school class – English. So that summer I took a bus to another school in town, a real high school. It had hallways. It had windows and classrooms with doors. Amazingly, the chairs were in straight columns, and the teacher never moved from behind his desk. It was a classroom just like I had seen in the movies!

I sat in the last chair, the column nearest the windows, propped up my textbook, set the book I was reading inside it, and read all summer. The best of possible worlds! The teacher’s voice was a low, steady drone from the front of the class; no one was paying attention. There were no creative projects, nothing to turn my brain on for – I was envious of the students who got to “learn” like this all the time! This was what high school was supposed to be!

One result of growing up in Columbia is that as a teacher I make my students sit in a circle so we can all interact. I walk around the classroom. I try to think of creative homework assignments. The second result is that I can read anything anywhere; I can make myself concentrate on any mental task no matter what confusion reigns around me.

The last result is that I don’t really ‘get’ hating someone else because they have a different religion. In this, perhaps inadvertently, Columbia was eminently successful. When I got to college and heard a woman from my dorm disparage another woman because “she was Catholic,” I was surprised. You would dislike someone because of their religion? Really? It seemed so oddly old-fashioned, like living in a house without electricity. Not trusting someone because of their religion? Weird.

I think part of the reason I could live overseas in Germany, Cyprus, the United Arab Emirates and Oman is that I grew up with such a mix of people. Or to be more precise, people from different backgrounds who were happy to live near people from other different backgrounds. As a child, it never occurred to me that I was supposed to fear or hate someone whose appearance, religion, background, language and/or country of origin was different than mine. Not, I hope, in a holier-than-thou sort of way, but I wasn’t taught to fear or hate, so I didn’t fear or hate. People Power, plain and simple.

Navigating Working in USA without Speaking English, part 1

Returning to USA – Culture Shock essays

Culture Shock – Adjusting to American Hand Shakes

Researching and Working on the Arabian Peninsula: Creating Effective Interactions

Poem: “For a Student Who Used AI to Write a Paper,” Joesph Fasano

“For a Student Who Used AI to Write a Paper,” Joseph Fasano

Now I let it fall back
in the grasses.
I hear you. I know
this life is hard now.
I know your days are precious
on this earth.
But what are you trying
to be free of?
The living? The miraculous
task of it?
Love is for the ones who love the work.

****

“Sudden Hymn in Winter,” Joseph Fasano

What if, after years
of trial,
a love should come
and lay a hand upon you
and say,
this late,
your life is not a crime

Two poems for courage: “Against Hesitation” by Charles Rafferty and “Thalassa” by Louis MacNeice

A good poem for hard times – “Atlas” by U. A. Fanthorpe

Poems – “Finding Poems for my Students” by Mohja Kahf

Poems

Steve Cass

(photo by Hussein Baomar)

Some types of sadness lessen in time, while some submerge, then come back full-strength. Today is two years since Steve Cass passed away. I still miss him terribly – he was so cheerful that he pulled people along with his happy magic. For Steve, every morning was a fresh start, a new chance for good things to happen. The motto he taught students was ‘where there’s a will, there’s a way’ which aptly sums up his philosophy: there is always hope, always a way forward. His joie de vivre was a much needed tonic for me and many others.

Yet with all his positivity he didn’t ignore, overlook or accept corrupt behavior. He was a gentleman, but also a warrior for better teaching and he continually fought on behalf of our students. His insistence on speaking truth to power was a much needed jolt of honesty for those who only heard a chorus of approval for their policies, regardless of those policies’ effectiveness or usefulness.

Now that I have moved back to the States, I often wish I could talk over with him all of my culture shock and how much I miss Oman. I know he would have exactly the right words to make this transition easier. He made life brighter for everyone he met.

Steve Cass

Steve Cass, teacher and friend

Remembering Steve Cass

Teaching: Reflections on Culture Shocks

I had a wonderful time teaching for 21 years on the Arabian Peninsula; I wish I could have stayed longer. My students were smart, funny, creative and kind. Yet, coming from a different culture, I had some assumptions which I needed to unlearn. I realize the following might sound negative so I want to be clear: there are difficult students no matter where you teach. My students in the Emirates and Oman were 99% lovely and 1% challenging.

teachers control all areas of a school

This was the first assumption I had to unlearn. On the Arabian Peninsula, teachers are in control of only their students only in the classroom only during class time; any other attempts to correct behavior can be seen as an unwarranted invasion of privacy. Asking a student who is leaning against a “no smoking” sign in a hallway to stop smoking was met with a furious denunciation most of the time. Asking students to stop screaming in the hallway was likewise often met with contempt, in addition to louder screaming, hysterical giggles and rude words.

The first few times this happened, I thought I was dealing with unusually difficult students but I soon realized this was the norm. It didn’t matter if I asked politely, merely gestured or evoked my status; very few students would willingly put out the cigarette or stop yelling. I did not have the right to police hallways.

if students make mistakes, they will be polite

On the Arabian Peninsula, the older you are, the more self-control you are expected to have. This can set up a kind of get-out-of-jail-free card for students in that if they are rude, they believe that the elder teacher must keep their temper. A common tactic was for a student do something wrong, act rudely, elicit anger from teacher, then claim victim status, thus shifting the conversation from the student’s mistake to the teacher’s anger.

Nothing was more infuriating for a student than a composed teacher, such as my saying sadly and slowly, “I am so sorry, this paper is more than a week late so I can’t give you a grade. I will review it for mistakes so you are ready for the midterm, but your grade is zero.” My staying calm meant they could not get traction to change the focus from their not doing the work to my being “angry.” My expressing sorrow and speaking quietly meant the discussion centered on them, not me.

students with a low level of English will be the hardest to teach

This seemed to me quite straightforward, the less I could communicate with a student, the less I would be able to teach them. But the opposite was true. Students with low language skills would either make an effort by focusing in class, getting help from friends, coming to see me in my office or signing up for tutoring. A few tried to cheat, but if I caught them, they would either give up and drop the class or settle down to work honestly.

The worst difficulties were always with the students who had a high level of English. There was often a terribly dynamic in which they felt that, since they had always received straight As, high grades were their right. Other teachers had feted their ability to speak fluently, so they felt they had mastered all the necessary skills.

The most grueling conversations I had were with students who expected a perfect grade for perfect English combined with problematic elements such as giving a presentation while twisting their body, clutching their clothing and reading long paragraphs off PowerPoint slides or someone who wrote an essay without any grammar mistakes which was a hodge-podge of ideas in no discernable order.

Trying to explain that there was a difference between writing correct sentences and having well-organized essays was futile. Trying to explain that even good writers revised and reorganized their work was futile. It was also futile to explain that shorter sentences and essays divided into paragraphs are expected in English essays. Some students had gone through high school and some university-level classes with non-native speakers of English who allowed 60-word sentences and two-page essays which were all one paragraph. My saying that this was not usual in academic English was viewed as an attempt to steal their well-deserved marks.

It was frustrating for both me and the student to have these kinds of conversations. My point was, “you have the basics down, now let’s get you to the next level of writing with stronger openings, more fluid transitions between topics, better quotes, more interesting endings, etc.” Their point was, “I am getting 100/ 100 in my other classes, I know everything I need to know.”

teachers’ interactions with students are based on professional considerations

The most common metaphor for teachers is that they should be like a “mom,” i.e. endlessly forgiving and accepting. And like any situation with one mom and several children, students were always on the lookout for any signs of partiality.

Over the years, I tried to refine my teaching to eliminate any chance of being accused of favoritism. Instead of asking “who wants to read” or picking a random student, I would always start with the student who was sitting to the far right in the semi-circle. I used rubrics with highlighters to grade papers. For example, if a student lost points because of grammar issues, I would highlight the word “grammar” on the rubric in yellow and then highlight the paper’s grammar mistakes in yellow so they could easily see the correlation between their paper and their grade.

When they handed in an exam, I would immediately flip over the cover page with their name and I graded exams by going through everyone’s first page, then everyone’s second page (without looking back to see how a student did on page 1), etc.

All this effort mitigated some of the complaints but there was no way to make all the grades unbiased in their opinion. For example, I based the portion of the grade for “class participation” on three types of grades: 1) homework and recitations, 2) if they participated in group work and 3) reading checks, when I would walk around the room at the start of class to see if they had written notes/ definitions for the text we would read that day.

I picked which days I would check for reading at random and would write them in my planner ahead of time so I would not base my decision given who was present or whether I could see writing in their texts as I walked into class. But students would still complain, “She KNEW I didn’t do the reading, that’s why she checked today.”

One semester, as I walked out of the last class, one student was telling the others (in English, i.e., wanting to make sure I understood) “She ONLY checked readings on the days I didn’t prepare for class.” I know this was a self-preservation tactic (related to the next point) but the ones who practiced it created an unhealthy atmosphere of distrust towards teachers.

you make your choices and you live with the consequences

I went through my education with the idea that my grades were under my control. However, some students held the view that their grades were concocted from mysterious forces beyond their ken. Bad grades were not a result of them deciding not to do homework, come to class, ask questions or study; bad grades were the result of bad teaching and “circumstances.”

Being caught cheating on an exam or copying from the internet produced anger at me for not telling them that they were not allowed to copy paragraphs verbatim from other sources. When I printed out and highlighted the sections of the syllabus and assignment which explained that copying was not allowed, they said that they had not read that and hence didn’t know, so I did not have the right to lower their grade.

Some students had what I call the “two-world theory”; if they were late to class, they have a good reason but there was no acceptable excuse if another person (such as a food delivery person) was late. This odd dichotomy played out often. Students who missed 25% of my class complained viciously if a teacher missed their office hours. Students who turned in papers late complained about unorganized teachers. Students who broke rules such as using their phones in class, talking incessantly and copying homework from their friends complained if someone in administration did not do their job properly.

I never quite saw the contours of this problem – was it that the students were so endlessly coddled at home that they truly believed nothing could ever be their fault, or they felt so endlessly put upon that they were going to fight for whatever advantage they could get, or they felt everything was unfair and everyone was behaving badly so it didn’t matter if they did as well?

Of course, not all students acted like this, but the ones who did held on to the two-world theory so tightly that pointing out their hypocrisy (“yesterday you complained to me about how that person did not organize their time well and today you were 15 mintues late to class”) effected no change in attitude.

communal cultures means students will work well in groups

This is another issue that I don’t see all the contours of. I assumed that given the students were from tribe-based cultures and often spoke of the Omani dedication to peaceful coexistence, that group work would be a breeze. I quickly learned that a tribal upbringing meant that students would never rat out the students who did no work. It got to the point that a student wrote me an anonymous note asking me to stop doing group work as she had to do all the assignments; the other students in her group did nothing but she couldn’t say that publicly.

So I reworked groups as just discussion-based and told them that I would pick one student from the group at random to explain what the group had decided. This solved the issue of some students not participating.

But another problem remained: some students refused to speak to other students. I would set students in groups, then sit at my desk and pretend I was busy with paperwork. After a few minutes, I would look up and try to asses what was going on. Often if they were in groups of three, two students would talk and ignore the third one. So I learned to put students in pairs or groups of five. And I would always decide on the groups (deliberately splitting up any pairs of friends) as, the few times I let them choose, they would either pick their one friend, sit by the person they thought was the smartest person in the class or sit silently alone, making no effort to create an alliance, which is related to my next point.

try the new

When I was an undergraduate at University of Wisconsin-Madison, I signed up for a class on Northern European history on a whim because I didn’t know anything about that topic. On the first day we were given a list of possible topics for a presentation which would involve us teaching an entire class on the subject we picked. I choose the Finnish Civil War as I knew nothing about it.

When I went to the library to find some books on my topic, I discovered that my professor had written the definitive three volume history of the Finnish Civil War. I researched and cobbled a draft together, then went to his office to ask some questions and ended up sobbing as I was overwhelmed by having to explain this war to all my classmates in front of a Finnish professor. The poor man calmed me down and I managed to pull through.

I continued on this path of picking classes that were way beyond my knowledge base with similar consequences. When I studied at a German university, I took a class on Russian drama because I had never read one. German universities give collective exams after 3 years of study, but since I was transferring back to Wisconsin, I had to go to the professor’s office and have an oral exam at the end of the semester. One of his questions was “What is distinctive about Chekhov’s dramas?” I answered the best I could but I could not get the right answer which was the pauses between when actors speak. I had no idea about this feature as I had only read the plays; I had never seen one performed.

When I was accepted into my Masters of Education program for foreign language and social studies, the university required that I take two American History classes. I picked one on the 1600s and 1700s and one on the civil war. The Early American class had Masters and PhD in American History students and was based on class discussions. In the Civil War class, my classmates were two American History PhD students and we three traded off presenting books we had read. I was in way over my head all semester. I also moved overseas three times without knowing anyone in the country and traveled solo through Europe and several Asian countries.

I am laying this all out to explain why I was surprised that students generally refused to take any new class, even when they had lobbied for the class to be added to the plan of study. The first time a course was offered, so few students would sign up that it was closed or run with only a handful of students. Sometimes a new class was offered for 2 or 3 semesters before it was finally had enough participants. And the first semester of teaching a new class was misery as students dealt with their anxiety by skipping class.

Even a new type of assignment (such as writing a shape poem or a dialog with a character) was met with steep resistance. There would be endless questions and if I said “just go ahead and try, just write something, there’s no grade for this, dive in” inevitably several students would simply stare at the paper until I came and reexplained what to do to them personally. It was never a language issue; they understood what I was asking them to do, they were simply paralyzed at the thought of trying a new style of writing.

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Two poems for courage: “Against Hesitation” by Charles Rafferty and “Thalassa” by Louis MacNeice

“Against Hesitation,” by Charles Rafferty

If you stare at it long enough

the mountain becomes unclimbable.

Tally it up. How much time have you spent

waiting for the soup to cool?

Icicles hang from January gutters

only as long as they can. Fingers pause

above piano keys for the chord

that will not form. Slam them down

I say. Make music of what you can.

Some people stop at the wrong corner

and waste a dozen years hoping

for directions. I can’t be them.

Tell every girl I’ve ever known

I’m coming to break her door down,

that my teeth will clench

the simple flower I only knew

not to give … Ah, how long did I stand

beneath the eaves believing the storm

would stop? It never did.

And there is lightning in me still

“Thalassa,” Louis MacNeice

Run out the boat, my broken comrades;

Let the old seaweed crack, the surge

Burgeon oblivious of the last

Embarkation of feckless men,

Let every adverse force converge–

Here we must needs embark again.

Run up the sail, my heartsick comrades;

Let each horizon tilt and lurch–

You know the worst: your wills are fickle,

Your values blurred, your hearts impure

And your past life a ruined church–

But let your poison be your cure.

Put out to sea, ignoble comrades,

Whose record shall be noble yet;

Butting through scarps of moving marble

The narwhal dares us to be free;

By a high star our course is set,

Our end is Life. Put out to sea.

My Job

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A good poem for hard times – “Atlas” by U. A. Fanthorpe

Antigone and Ismene – Making Difficult Choices

Two poems about nature and rest: “The Peace of Wild Things” by Wendell Berry and “Sleeping in The Forest,” Mary Oliver

Antigone and Ismene – Making Difficult Choices

This is a wonderful article:

https://www.washingtonpost.com/opinions/2024/01/15/hong-kong-security-law-chow-hang-tung-jailed/

I have taught Antigone many times. The first was almost by chance. I needed a Greek play and didn’t want to do Oedipus, so I picked up Antigone and was amazed by how powerful the play was. I had forgotten its strength and, importantly for a literature professor, how it balances out everyone’s POV. There is something to be said about each person’s argument. Teaching it was a joy. All the students had an opinion about what should happen and were happy to engage with the characters and plot. I ended up writing some essays and doing some presentations about using Greek plays on the Arabian Peninsula but what was most interesting about Antigone was that students did not judge Ismene harshly.

Gan’s article sets up a dichotomy with Antigone as the brave/ correct one and Ismene as the sister who must be forgiven. My students did not not make that division – each sister was doing what she felt was right. Most agreed that Antigone was correct to bury her brother against the laws of the state, but that did not necessarily mean that Ismene was behaving badly. I found that quality of acceptance very heartening.

Articles:

“Using Cultural Understandings to Improve Teaching in Oman,” in Unpackaging Theory and Practice in Educational Sciences. Abdülkadir Kabadayı, ed. Lyon: Livre de Lyon. 2023: 129-141.  https://www.livredelyon.com/educational-sciences/unpackaging-theory-practice-in-educational-sciences_595.

“Teaching Paired Middle Eastern and Western Literary Texts,” in Advancing English Language Education. Wafa Zoghbor and Thomaï Alexiou, eds. Dubai: Zayed University Press, 2020: 221-223.

“Teaching Literature on the Arabian Peninsula,” Anthropology News website, October 7 2019. http://www.anthropology-news.org/index.php/2019/10/07/teaching-literature-on-the-arabian-peninsula/

“Writing Prompts to Facilitate Creativity and Interesting Texts,” Proceedings of the 15th Oman International ELT Conferences. Muscat: Sultan Qaboos University Press, 2016: 46-52.

“Selecting the Right Literary Texts for Middle Eastern Students: Challenges and Reactions,” in Focusing on EFL Reading: Theory and Practice. Rahma Al-Mahrooqi, ed. Muscat: Sultan Qaboos University Press, 2014: 165-188.

“Who Are You Calling ‘Coddled’?: ‘Cloistered Virtue’ and Choosing Literary Texts in a Middle Eastern University,” Pedagogy 13.3, 2013: 415-427.

“Do You know a Creon?: Making Literature Relevant in an Omani University,” in Literature Teaching in EFL/ESL: New Perspectives. Rahma Al-Mahrooqi, ed. Muscat: Sultan Qaboos University Press, 2012: 302-314.