Using Creative Writing Prompts in Language Learning

photo by Hussein Baomar

Meera Lee Patel just published a new book: Learn to Let Go: A Journal for New Beginnings so I want to post this essay about her (and Katie Daisy’s) work. Their texts are always very effective in helping students improve their writing. Reflecting on how students reacted so positively to their artwork/ writings made me want to help other teachers find the benefits in using non-traditional writing prompts.

Abstract

This article highlights the importance of using interesting writing prompts to help students reach their language goals. The article reviews academic texts on the importance of using writing prompts, then gives examples of different types and explains how different prompts can be used to reach a variety of teaching objectives such as writing argument papers, varying audiences, learning grammar rules and increasing vocabulary. Using creative prompts to promote co-writing and class discussions are also explored. Various types of creative workbooks by Daisy (2018) and Patel (2018) are used as examples of how pairing prompts with appealing visuals can help students write longer and better essays. The procedures and positive results of using prompts are also discussed. Specifically, the author has found that using prompts means less delay in students beginning to do in-class writings, as well as creating longer and more detailed texts.

keywords: Language learning, creativity, writing prompts, writing journals

Introduction

It might seem odd to be discussing creative writing texts in a scholarly text about language learning, but in order to increase proficiency students need to produce writing. Colorful, vibrant, engaging texts will draw students in and make writing more enjoyable. Further, having an interesting prompt will help students write more and create the need for new vocabulary.

The impetus for my research on the topic of using interesting texts to help promote language learning started in a bookstore over ten years as I was looking for a text to help me learn Arabic. There were four choices. The first was a huge, thick paperback, as I paged through I saw that the vocabulary list for the first chapter had over 40 words. It seemed overwhelming so I set it down. The next two books were A4-sized paperbacks with a grammar rule at the top of each page and then 10-15 lines to write practice sentences.

The fourth book was a small paperback filled with black and white cartoon drawings and a wide variety of exercise (matching, fill-in-the-blank, true-false, charts, etc.). I not only bought it, I worked my way through the entire book eventually completing every page. Then I went on to buy and finish three more books by the same authors (Wightwick and Gaafar 2021). The user-friendliness of that Arabic textbook with its cute drawings, diverse tasks, short vocabulary lists and student-appropriate vocabulary made it easy to motivate myself to study every week. The lessons were not just about grammar rules, but included realistic conversations and creative expression. Making learning fun was a key element to my continued learning.

When I create syllabi for writing classes such as Advanced Academic English, Advanced English Language, Culture in the Classroom, Psychology of Language, Situational English, Writing for the Professions and Writing Workshop I take my person experience into account and think about my students’ attitudes towards learning. Sometimes I might give a short piece of literature, a question, a quote or an interesting painting as a prompt.

The purpose of this paper is to explain the pedagogical background for using creative writing prompts and to give specific examples of texts that language teachers might use.

Review of literature

Creative Writing

There is wide-spread agreement increasing student’s access to and use of creative writing into the language classroom is useful. This is usually accomplished through using interesting speaking and writing prompts, as well as literature such as poems or stories.

For example, both the Oxford University Press and the British Council recommend using creative writing to help create effective lessons in the EFL classroom. In the article “7 ways to bring Creative Writing into the #EFL classroom” published on the Oxford University Press website, various teachers explain writing prompts that engage students. The ideas include giving student the first part of a story then having students write their own ending and giving a non-written stimulus, such as playing music and let students write their reaction.

On the British council website, Maley (n.d.) argues that creative writing “aids language development at all levels: grammar, vocabulary, phonology and discourse.” Further, “a key characteristic of creative writing is a willingness to play with the language.” Morissey (n.d) explains that “Most teachers would agree that what we want to say, what comes from the heart, we are happier to work on [and thus] Creative writing involves playful but rigorous work with language.” For example, “to say precisely what they mean, students have to be very careful in their use of vocabulary and idioms.”

The website TEFL UK, which offers on-line English teacher training classes, states that “Learning a language is a process that requires different types of activities to be involved for the student to truly progress…And, it’s the teacher’s job to make these activities as engaging and useful as possible” (6 Creative Writing Activities 2021).

Discussing motivation, Arshavskaya (2015) presents research that “suggests that creative writing assignments can serve as an important mediational tool that fosters greater motivation and engagement with writing” (75).

Further, Deveci (2020) argues that the “development of creativity in students will contribute to their personal triumphs and the economic and social development of their societies” (30). His research highlights four themes which show how students perceive themselves to be creative four (Originality, Problem-solving, Designing and Interest in learning). These are incorporated into writing using nine strategies:

  • Experience – using personal facts and historical information, having real, interesting, evidence
  • Lexis – using synonyms, simple words, attractive words, interesting words, varying registers, picking the right word
  • Language use – using good/perfect grammar, correct punctuation, no spelling mistakes, proofreading, using figurative language and rhetorical questions, writing that is not too simple, repetitive, long or complex, using a mixture of simple and complex sentences, avoiding long boring sentences
  • Familiarity with readers – knowing audience, reader interest areas, reader concerns, readers’ behavior and relevance to readers
  • Originality – using something new, out of ordinary, original ideas
  • Organization – linking ideas together, linking words, avoiding repetition of ideas/information
  • Length – not too long, not too detailed, enough information, focusing on relevant ideas
  • Voice – using the active voice, directed to reader, self
  • Detail – using specifics (34)

Language Learning and Literature

Talking about English language classrooms in Japan, Smith (2013) discusses how “students’ creative use of language, in particular in literary writing, may serve as an aid to certain aspects of language acquisition (particularly grammar and certain kinds of vocabulary)…Such tasks also appear to be motivating” (11). Celika, Mahmut, Violeta Dimovaa and Biljana Ivanovska (2012) make a similar point about using children’s literature in Macedonia classrooms.

Alsyouf (2020) contends that “Involving creative writing as a method to learn and teach languages in this regard can play a significant role in stimulating students to improve their communicative skills” (33). For example, he states that “Poetry…can function as a prolific source of vocabulary for the language of poetry appeals to the mind where it is easily memorised and from which it is smoothly retrieved” (35).

Similarly, Sinha (2017) argues that “Poetry can play a significant role in language learning in general and English poems can be used in the language classrooms for effective language learning for ELLs” (245). He explores “how contextualizing poetry teaching with a linguistically oriented model, with certain well-defined steps, offers an extensive variety of language learning opportunities” (245). The stages are

Step 1: Putting the poem in context

Step 2: Performing the poem

Step 3: Investigation of the title

Step 4: Progress through the poem

Step 5: Reading of the poem

Step 6: Profiling the poem linguistically

Step 7: Critical appreciation of a poem (245)

In terms of specific texts, Felemban (2012) makes the point that using the famous play The Importance of Being Ernest by Oscar Wilde allows students to increase communicative competence by understanding how to use polite expressions in English. Learning how to use words in realistic ways means that students can avoid “conflict and misunderstanding” (76). More examples can be found in Gardner’s (2023) article “Teaching Language Through Literature.”

Prompts

In Best’s essay about “How to Teach Creative Writing” (2020), the first two steps for inspiring students to write are are “Create inspiring and original prompts” and “Unpack the prompts together.”[1] Daskalovska and Dimova (2012) state that “If learners are to be encouraged to participate in a conversation in the classroom, they should be given a meaningful content that will provoke their interest, capture their imagination and give them something important to talk about” (1182).

As the scholarly agreement is clear that good prompts are important, the issue becomes: which texts to use? There are two kinds of texts which are beneficial for language teachers. One is a straight-forward book written for classrooms such as Yeh and O’Reilly’s Creative Writing: A Workbook with Readings (2022). Similarly, Thorpe’s Teaching Creative Writing to Second Language Learners (2021) has chapters which include: Brainstorming, Dialogue, Word Choice, Digital Composition and Editing, all of which would be useful in any language classroom.

A second type of text is not written for a classroom, but has a lot of benefits for teachers such as Daisy’s How to Be a Wildflower (2013) and Patel’s Made Out of Stars (2018). These books are classified as self-expression journals meaning there are blank pages with decorations around the edges so that the reader can write out responses to the vividly illustrated quotes and questions.

A key element of these type of journals is that they engage students who are less verbally focused. For example, in How to Be a Wildflower (2013), there is the quote “Afoot and light-hearted I take to the open road, healthy, free, the world before me” (16). The words are written on a page with a painting of a road vanishing into the distance with fields with flowers and trees on either side. A student who might be intimidated or unsure when faced with an empty page can take ideas from the illustration.

When looking for journals, teachers need to be be careful that the book fits within their students’ culture. For example, Kelly’s True You (2020) has an emphasis on personal issues such as spirituality might not be appropriate for some classrooms.

Method

In this section, I discuss various methods and procedures for helping students produce interesting writings which can be used as foundation texts for language learning such as student journals, interesting prompts and creative workbooks.

Journals

Student journals might seem better suited for creative writing classes, but I have used journals for non-fiction writing classes such as Writing Workshop and Writing for the Professions. Each student has to bring an A4, lined book and for the first 10 minutes of class, they do free-writing based on a prompt I give to the class.

Having all their writing collected in one place means that there is always writing at hand which can serve as a springboard for lessons. For example, I can ask students to take their free writing and turn it from first person to third person, from present tense to past tense, to add an adjective to every noun, etc.

Writing prompts

Best (2020) suggests using the following prompts:

  • personal memories (“Write about a person who taught you an important lesson”)
  • imaginative scenarios
  • lead-in sentences (“I looked in the mirror and I couldn’t believe my eyes. Somehow overnight I…”).
  • Show a thought-provoking image with a directive (e.g. show a photo of a wooden cabin and ask “Who do you think lives in this mountain cabin? Describe their life”).

Some of the prompts I use with classes are:

  • Look out the window, describe what you see
  • If you could only take 5 things from your room, what would you take and why?
  • What is the perfect picnic lunch?
  • Describe someone who is trying to get something in a sneaky way
  • Describe someone who is trying to give advice and the other person is not listening
  • If you could make one wish come true for someone else, who would you give the wish to and what would you wish for?
  • Describe a person you know by describing the person’s room
  • Describe a person you know by describing how the person walks and one object the person has (car, purse, book bag, computer, etc.)
  • Pretend you suddenly jump 5 years ahead in your life – write what you are doing/ what your life is like in the future

As the first step for students who will write argument essays, I use prompts such as

  • Explain something that you learned over the semester break (how to do something, why not to do something, that a person is better or worse than you had thought, etc.)
  • Write about a time when you thought you were right, but it turned out that you were wrong, or a time when you were right and everyone else was wrong
  • Describe a person who you respected more than you should have, or a person who you respected less than you should have
  • Describe something that should change to make your home town better
  • Pretend you are the chief architect and explain why a building on campus should be moved to a different location, or why a municipal building such as the airport or a hospital should be in a different location

Prompts for creative writing include:

  • If you breakfast/ shoes/ desk could talk to you, what would it say?
  • Write a lullaby to something that is NOT a child
  • Describe your life if you lived on the moon
  • Imagine you are writing with something other than a pen/pencil such as a vegetable, a fish or lipstick, what would you choose and what kind of story will you write?
  • If you planted your heart, what would grow?
  • Describe a person using animal metaphors
  • If you could be any animal, which animal would you be and why?

The benefit of these kind of prompts is that they can be modified to meet the needs of different classes. For example, some teachers might find the questions “If you could be any animal, which animal would you be and why?” too low-level for their class. They might try one of these variations: “What animal do you think should disappear from the Earth?,” “What animal should be found in every country?,” “What extinct animal should be brought back to life?” If the students are studying in a foreign country, the teacher can ask “What animal from your country do you miss the most?,” “What animal from your country should be brought here?” or “What animal from this country should be brought back to your country?”

The same type of questions can work with topics such as houses or clothing and can be scaled up or down in view of the students’ level. Writing about a favorite piece of clothing can work for lower-level student using basic vocabulary such colors. Students who are the the intermediate level can use the same question but focus on adjectives of texture (fuzzy, itchy, ironed, lumpy, rough, etc.), material (cotton, leather, linen, silk, wool, etc.) and technique (knitted, quilted, woven, etc.).  Higher level students can work with more descriptive words such as embroidered, nubby, pleated, puffy, ruffled and shimmering.

Questions about non-controversial topics such as food and gardens can lead to expanding vocabulary choices, such as descriptions of slimy, rubbery okra and soggy, syrupy pancakes. When describing their dream garden, students can practice or learn words such as bud, bloom, cobblestones, graveled, paved, prickly, wilted and withered.

All of these prompts create the need for new vocabulary/ expressions and can be expanded into longer pieces of writing. For example, a question about an animal can lead to students writing a description of the animal, its habitat and what it eats, a story about seeing the animal, etc. Teachers also might ask students switch their writing with another student, who can then attempt to add to or ask questions about what is already written.

Co-writing and discussion prompts

Another type of prompt is when two students are asked to write together to produce a dialog which might be realistic such as, write a discussion between two people who have not seen each other in a long time and one person has changed a lot. Some dialogs might be unrealistic such as write out a conversation with a famous person. Another idea is to give students a specific setting, such as write a dialog in a kindergarten, a flower store, on a rainy beach, etc.

If the goal of the lesson is verbal, not written, production teachers can ask for oral responses to prompts, see for example Kaivola, Salomaki & Taina (2012) for a discussion about how working together enriches language learning.

Some of the prompts I use to start conversations include:

  • Is it better to grow up or to be a child forever?
  • If you could have any ‘super power’ (fly, be invisible, to breathe under water…) which would you want to have and why? What would you do?
  • What award for “Best…” would you like to get? i.e. Best Smile, Best Shoes, Best Friend, Best Tea-making, etc.

For students in their teens and early twenties, asking their opinion about their education is usually a good way to get people talking:

  • Should kids under the age of 10 have homework?
  • Should art and music be mandatory at high schools?
  • Should your school have tests every month or only midterms/ finals?
  • Should your school have a requirement for a third foreign language?
  • What times should high schools start? What should be the time of the first (earliest) class at your school?
  • What should be the school colors or mascot for your university?
  • Should you stay friends with someone made a mistake and told someone your secret?

Older students might be more interested in questions that relate to their lives:

  • Are there times when it is ok to lie?
  • Is talent or hard work more important?
  • Should you invite foreign people to your house for dinner?
  • Should you invite people from other countries to your family’s weddings?
  • Should people be forced to use their real names on social media?
  • Should there be a minimum age for women to marry?
  • Should every large business have a day care?
  • Should parents hit their children if they misbehave?

Creative workbooks

I find creative workbooks to be very useful, for example Daisy’s How to Be a Wildflower (2016) and The Wildflower’s Workbook (2018), as well as Patel’s Start Where You Are (2015) and Made Out of Stars (2018). The titles might appear non-academic, but they are valuable resources for language teachers. First, the texts use a variety of colors so they are attractive to look at and catch students’ attention. But the hues are bright, not pastel, and the illustrations are vivid, not cutesy, so students don’t feel that they are working with a children’s book.

The variety of the pages mean that students don’t get bored and the variety of prompts mean that teachers always have a way to connect student writing to a language lesson. For example, a dark blue page with stars and the instruction “take a walk at twilight” can lead into a lesson on giving commands, or the words for different times of day or writing comparisons such as “during the day…, but during the night….”. Pages with a well-crafted quote such “There they stand, the innumerable stars, shining in order like a living hymn written in light” by N. P. Willis as can lead into a discussion of the importance of the repetitions of sound, an easy way to teach alliteration.

In addition to the books, there are also decks of cards with illustrations and quotes which are very also helpful, for example, Daisy’s How to Be a Moonflower Deck (2023). This has 78, 4 by 6 inch cards which are printed on heavy paper; each card has an illustration with a quote or instruction. Thus instead of telling students to go to a specific page, you can ask students to pick the card they like. As the cards are in a variety of colors such as grey, pinks, blues, green and violets, students can take one that interests them.

Seeing a card illustrated with a full moon and blue/grey flowers can lead into students writing about a trip they took at night or hypotheticals questions such as “Would you like to travel to the moon, why or why not”?” or “Imagine there is something living on the moon, what is it and what does it look like?”

Students bring photos

Another way to spark ideas is to use student-generated objects as writing prompts. For example, ask each student to bring in 2 or 3 large, interesting photos, printed from the web or from a magazine. Collect the photos and then hand them out again so that each student has new pictures in front for them. Depending on the language goals for that lesson, you can ask students to describe what they see, make a dialog about the image, create a story that takes place in the picture, etc. An easy way to work on verbal skills is to have one student describe the image out loud without letting anyone see the picture, while other students try to draw the image following the explanation.

Procedure

For all of these methods, my system is the same. At the start of class, students settle down and open their writing journals. I say the writing prompt aloud and ask if the students understand. I wait a moment for them to start writing and walk around the room to see if anyone is confused. Then I sit quietly at the front of the class and take attendance. If anyone comes in late, I walk over to them and tell them the prompt.

After the ten minutes, I use their writing as a basis for the lesson. For example, if it is the beginning of the semester with lower-level students, I can use a simple prompt such as

“Look out the window, describe what you see.” Then I might talk about using all five senses. I ask them what the five senses are, write them on the board and ask which senses they included in their description. Next I ask them to try to add on some sentences to make sure they have descriptions of sound, taste, smell, feel and sight.

In the same way, if the prompt was “Pretend you suddenly jump 5 years ahead in your life – write what you are doing/ what your life is like in the future.” I would ask students what topics they covered and write their ideas on the board, such as their house, their job, their family, where they have traveled to, etc. Then I ask student to add in details to enhance their descriptions. Thus a student who only wrote about their future family might add in information about their house and vacations.

With more advanced students I can ask them to expand their writing by adding, for example a dialog which gives me the chance to teach how to write a conversation using quote marks. This can make the explanation of “Write about a time when you thought you were right, but it turned out that you were wrong, or a time when you were right and everyone else was wrong” more interesting.

I collect the writing journals two or three times during the semester and give a grade on overall amount of writing with a rubric so students know what is required (see Appendix A for an example).

Results

Teacher Perceptions

It is sometimes difficult to tease out exactly why students’ writing improves. For my writing classes, I always see clear improvement in amount and quality of writing when I give interesting writing prompts. But I can’t go so far as to say the prompts are the only reason students show progress in language learning. What I can claim is that with good prompts, students dive quickly into their writing. I don’t have students asking to go to the bathroom, trying to talk to another student, writing off-topic, staring at the walls or doodling. The first, sometimes biggest, hurdle of getting that first sentence down is easily passed. Prompts which catch students’ attention encourage them to write their ideas, while much-used prompts such as “is driving fast dangerous?” “is fast-food healthy” or “is smoking bad for you?” lead to rote, uninteresting essays.

When I collect writing journals, I can see how student’s ability to produce correct sentences improves quickly over time. For a Writing Workshop in Fall 2023, students needed to write five types of essays: personal story, opinion, comparison, analysis and argument. Every class (except exams) started with a non-fiction prompt of the type listed above and 10 minutes of silent writing.

Student X wrote 7 sentences in response to the prompt of the first day of class. After 2 months, they were writing 14 or more sentences. Student Y started at 1 paragraph and was writing 3 paragraphs within 2 months. Student Z had one run-on sentence on the first day and 8 sentences within a month.

Sometimes the improvement is not in the amount, but the organization. On the first day of class, Student 1 wrote 5 sentences, one of which was 12 lines long. Within a month that student’s writing for one day had 3 paragraphs, with 3, 4 and 3 correct sentences respectively.

In a creative writing course in Spring 2023, on the first day I introduced the topic of writing a poem, student A wrote an 8-line poem in ten minutes. After a month, they wrote a 14-line poem in the same time span. The same results occurred with all students, e.g. student B went from 3 lines to 11 lines. Student C went from 4 lines to 10 lines and student D went from 5 lines to 23 lines.

In the same class, for the non-fiction task of doing a detailed, creative description of a person or place, student A wrote one run-on sentence on the first day of the unit. After a month, they wrote 5 short sentences. Student B went from 6 sentences on the first day to 18 sentences on the last day. Student C day went from 4 sentences to 12 sentences; student D went from 4 sentences to 16 sentences.

Learning to compose first, correct later helps get students over the fear of producing writing in the target language. Having ten sentences and editing that down to six is much easier than trying to write six perfect sentences. And having a topic they have a strong opinion on such as “Should your school have tests every month or only midterms/ finals?” means that they are more willing to risk speaking.

Another result of using creative writing prompts is that there is a larger chance that students will do their own work. When prompts are closely tailored for your class, students can’t find anything similar on-line and might even have trouble coming up with AI answers. For example, there are hundreds of on-line samples of essays to respond to: “Should university students have to wear a uniform?” But you can’t find one that answers: “If you suddenly became an Omani animal, which animal would you change into?”

Student Perceptions   

Students’ responses to prompts are generally positive. When I asked 20 former students to fill out a simple, anonymous questionnaire (see Appendix B), every response about writing prompts included words such as “helpful,” beneficial” and “useful.”  These were all third- or fourth year female students who had taken a writing class and/ or a literature class with me.

In answering the question “Do you think it’s better to have a teacher give writing prompts or not? Explain your ideas,” a student wrote, “a teacher gives students writing prompts helps guide students into writing, especially considering that the students may lack creativity.” Another wrote, prompts “help me to have a starting point, this also helps me organize my writing.”

In reply to “Do you think the writing prompts helped you to become a better writer – why or why not?” one student wrote, “yes, because prompts are like the starting point that triggers our writing process to improve.” Another student explained, “they helped me in broadening my perspective, especially when it comes to saying my opinions. This helped me do better in my other courses as well.”

Reacting to the example prompts I listed on the questionnaire, students wrote favorably, for example “they will push the student to look-up new vocabulary” and “they will improve his/ her skills to write or talk about new subjects, that are out of their comfort zone.”

When given the option of which was better for students: the writing prompts I gave or “more serious ones such as: describe your day, write about a vacation you took, is eating at a restaurant healthy?” one student wrote, “I like the above [the ones I gave], because if a student writes about serious topics it will be like memorizing things; it doesn’t develop the sense of creativity and sharing ideas with others.” Another answer was that my examples are “mostly useful, they help us improve our writing by writing on new subjects.”[2]

About using writing journals, students were also positive. In response to the question, “Did you like using a Writing Journal – why or why not?” students wrote ““Yes, because it is basically a practice to write daily and find different ideas about different things,” “Yes, it helped a lot in my other classes,” and “Yes, I learned a new writing style.” For the second question, “Do you think it’s better to have OR not have a writing journal? Explain your ideas,” one student said, “I think it’s better to have a writing journal because it helps us be more organized.” Another student wrote, “I think it’s better to have a writing journal because it develops the sense of creativity and gives us a place to express ourselves and organize our ideas.”

Discussion

As I have argued elsewhere (Risse 2023, 2020, 2019) learning goes smoothly when teachers meet students halfway by creating interesting activities that match students’ levels and interests. In reply to my question “Do you think the writing prompts helped you to become a better writer – why or why not?” one student wrote, “coming up with a new idea can be a bit difficult at the beginning of the writing.” Another student echoed this idea by saying, “students who lack creativity need prompts to help sort their thoughts.”

Further, it can difficult and/ or boring to explain grammar and composition rules with an unexciting model. But if you ask: “If you planted your heart, what would grow?” you can get a paragraph students will enjoy writing and you will be interested to read. That prompt can lead to a lesson on prepositions, e.g. you put your heart in the ground, cover it with soil, give it water from a pot. The same prompt can be used to explain the passive voice, e.g. I planted my heart; my heart was planted. It can also be used to explain the subjunctive mood, e.g. If I planted my heart, then a peach tree would grow.

Whatever I need to teach, it’s easier when students who have a topic they are invested in. For a low-level student describing “their perfect picnic lunch” gives them a chance to ask about words that they want to use. They are not interacting with a pre-planned list of colors; they are trying to figure out the specific colors they need for the food they picked. This puts them in control of their language learning

Teaching students how to write for a specific audience can be tricky as they need to construct a hypothetical reader. When I give a prompt such as “explain why a building on campus should be moved to a different location,” we can talk about how their writing will change if they are talking to other students or to the administration.

For me, the best part about using creative prompts is that I can sometimes reach tuned-out students as I can easily adopt a prompt to find something they want to talk about. If I hand out a Wildflower card saying, “write a conversation with the plant or animal” and an unhappy student responds, “I don’t want to talk to a tree.” I can say, “Well, the tree also does not want to be in this classroom. So where do you and the tree want to go?” If a student responds, “I want to be in a race car.” I can say, “Perfect! Write about taking the tree on a fast ride in a Formula I car, how is the tree going to like that?” Instead of a standard text about “a car I like,” the student has to expand their ideas in a new way: how will a tree fit into their favorite car?

Conclusion

A few years ago at a university Open Day, I was staffing a booth that had examples of students’ writing. A person walked by, picked up one of the poems, read it, then asked me, “Did the student write this or did you give them a prompt?” I said that I gave a prompt and they tossed it back on the table with a dismissive gesture and walked on.

That person, and some educators, think that students should come up with their own topics.         Yet in reply to my question “Do you think the writing prompts helped you to become a better writer – why or why not?” one student wrote, “Yes, because coming up with a new idea can be difficult but the writing prompts are there giving me the whole idea of what I am going to write about which helps a lot becoming a better writer.”

That student’s opinion summarizes my point of view perfectly. I don’t think it’s effective to say to language learners: “Write something!”  Interesting writing prompts help students to take steps towards using their target language in ways that are meaningful to them. If they are faced with a question they want to answer, students will try to find the vocabulary, expressions and grammar points to convey what they want to say. Depending on the students’ level, a good prompt can result in a few sentences or a few paragraphs which can be the basis of many types of lessons to help language learners reach their goals.

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Appendix A

Example of Grading Rubric for Journal with Responses to Writing Prompts

Writing Workshop – Rubric for Writing Journal – 10 points

Assignment first check – 3 points second –3 points third –4 points  
large-sized notebook 
only for Writing Workshop class 
date at the top of every page 
at least 1/2 page of writing for each class – even if you were absent  
name on the LAST page of journal 
rubric (this sheet) included on front page of journal 
grade  total
It is ok to:• make mistakes in your writing, the journal is for free-writing and drafts

• use colors

• write more than 1/2 page

 

 

Appendix B

Student Survey About Writing Prompts

Your Opinion about Writing Journals and Writing Prompts

Examples of Writing Prompts

Engl 285 – Writing Workshop

  • Write something you learned over the semester break
  • Write about a time when you learned that you were wrong/ vice versa
  • Write about a time you were stupidly not scared, or scared without reason
  • Write about when someone respected you more than you deserved or vice versa
  • Give advice to someone younger/ older/ your age
  • You have the power to move a building to new place (the university, airport, etc.) what you move and why?

Engl 320 – Introduction to Creative Writing

  • Your purse is talking to you, what does it say?
  • What do you want to take with you from your home/ town?
  • students bring in objects in their favorite color – students bring in interesting photos
  • Write about someone trying to cover a mistake
  • What would happen if you became any animal or bird or fish or you had a ‘super power’ (fly, be invisible, etc.)

Engl 315 – The Novel

  • Opinion of a character: Begin with “I like…” or “I do not like…”
  • Compare a character in a story and yourself or someone you know
  • Compare what we are reading to another story or movie
  • Write a different beginning to the novel or a chapter/ Guess what happens next
  • Discuss the text with another person
  • Write a scene from another character’s point of view

Do you think it’s better to have OR not have a writing journal? Explain your ideas.

Do you think it’s better to have a teacher give writing prompts or not? Explain your ideas.

Do you think teachers should give writing prompts like above or more serious ones such as: describe your day, write about a vacation you took, is eating at a restaurant healthy?

If you took a class with Dr. Risse:   write the course name or course number__________

Did you like using a Writing Journal – why or why not?

Do you think using a writing journal helped you improve your writing, why or why not?

Do you think the writing prompts helped you to become a better writer – why or why not?

[1] The following steps are: Writing warm-ups, Start planning, Producing rough drafts, Sharing drafts for peer feedback and Editing (Best 2020).

[2] I asked students to mark out the prompts that they thought were the most interesting.  The most frequently listed were:

Engl 285 – Writing Workshop

    • A time you were stupidly not scared, or scared without reason
    • A time when someone respected you more than you deserved or vice versa
    • You have the power to move a building to new place (the university, airport, etc.) what you move and why?

Engl 320 – Introduction to Creative Writing

    • Your purse is talking to you, what does it say?
    • What do you want to take with you from your home/ town?
    • You became any animal or bird or fish or you have a ‘super power’ (fly, be invisible, etc.)

Engl 315 – The Novel

    • Compare a character in a story and yourself or someone you know
    • Write a different beginning to the novel or a chapter/ Guess what happens next
    • Discuss the text with another person
    • Write a scene from another character’s point of view

Using Cultural Understandings to Improve Teaching, part 1

Selected Fiction (Novels and Short Stories) – Arabian Peninsula

Teaching: Reflections on Culture Shocks

Researching and Working on the Arabian Peninsula: Creating Effective Interactions

Culture Shock – Communication is Always the Worst Part (Don’t Lie), part 2

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Outline and Chapter Abstracts for ‘Researching, Teaching and Working on the Arabian Peninsula: Creating Effective Interactions’

Outline and Chapter Abstracts for Researching, Teaching and Working on the Arabian Peninsula: Creating Effective Interactions [ https://link.springer.com/book/10.1007/978-981-96-5326-3 ]

Chapter 1 – Situating Work and Research on the Arabian Peninsula 1

Overview 1

Audience 3

Locals 5

Non-locals 7

Becoming Local and Controlling Interpretations 8

My Background 11

Doing Research 14

Research and Safety 16

Other Voices 18

References 24

Chapter 2 – Literature Review for the Arabian Peninsula 27

Overview 27

Ethnography and the Importance of Changing Your Ideas 28

Ethnography and the Importance of Writing About When

You Are Wrong 29

General Anthropology Texts 32

Textbooks 32

Fieldwork Journals 33

Discussing Fieldwork/Fieldsites 33

General Texts About Anthropology and/or Arab/Islamic Countries 35

Arabian Peninsula Countries 36

Situating Arabian Peninsula Studies/History 36

Bahrain and Kuwait 37

Oman 38

Qatar 38

Saudi Arabia 39

The United Arab Emirates 40

Yemen 41

Arabian Peninsula Themes 43

From the Society 43

Islam 44

Labor/Migration 46

Partner Studies 47

Politics/Power 47

Social/Family 47

Survive/Thrive 48

Tribes 49

Women 50

References 53

Chapter 3 – Before Moving to the Arabian Peninsula 77

Overview: Thinking About Adjustments 77

Learn the Alphabet 79

Starting to Understand Islam If You Aren’t Muslim 80

Ramadan 80

Religion and Public Performance 82

Get Ready for Culture Shock 83

Get Ready for the Weather 85

Get Photos, Make Copies, Find a Bank and Get Change 86

Get in Touch with People 87

Buy Stuff 88

Plan for Happiness 88

For Travelers 89

Starting Out—Working 91

Starting Out—Teaching 92

Starting Out—Researching 94

Thinking About Fieldsites 95

Think About How You Present Yourself 96

Figure Out Your Way of Taking Notes, and Be Ready to Entirely Change It 97

Be Able to Explain Your Research in Ways That Make Sense to the People You Are Talking To 97

Proceed Slowly and Hope for a Hand-Off 98

References 100

Chapter 4 – Adjusting to Life on the Arabian Peninsula 103

Starting Out—General Points 103

Know Yourself and Be Prepared 103

Smile 104

Over-Explain 106

Don’t Lie 107

Refine Your Ability to Read People 108

Get Local 108

Get Generous 109

Be Yourself in Your Downtime 110

Time/Money Continuum 111

Safety/Anonymity 112

Transportation 113

Communication 114

Visual Cultures 118

Information Brokers 120

Friendship/Hospitality 121

Family 123

Busy/Lazy 125

References 130

Chapter 5 – Key Topics for Expat Researchers on the Arabian Peninsula 133

Overview—Positionality 133

Tribes 134

You Aren’t in a Tribe/You Are in a Tribe 135

Talking About Tribes 137

Clothes 138

Language 140

Knowing/Not Knowing Arabic 140

Age and Gender 142

Men 143

Special Themes 146

Exhaustion 146

Authenticity/Modernity 150

Prejudices 151

What Happens When You Love (or Hate) the People You Talk To? 153

Claiming Expertise 156

Safety 156

Payback 157

References 164

Chapter 6 – Strategies for Research on the Arabian Peninsula 167

Overview 167

Research Practicalities—Meeting Other Researchers 168

Getting in Touch with Other People for Information and Assistance 168

When You Meet 169

After Meeting 169

When Other People Get in Touch with You for Information 170

Research Practicalities—In the Field 171

Be the Most Cautious Version of Yourself Until You Are a Little Settled 171

Be Careful About Becoming a Dancing Monkey 172

Be Careful of Newspaper/Radio Interviews 173

Be Calm/Don’t Be Calm 174

Start Talking/Stop Talking 175

Go with the Flow 176

Think About Different Explanations 177

Be Wary of the Inclination to Save Anyone from Anything 178

Be Ready for Deflection Strategies and Deal with Them Calmly 179

Accept There Will Always Be Changes to Make and More to Do 180

Refinements 180

Have Situational Awareness 180

Sit Where You Are Told to Sit and Stay Seated 181

Giving and Receiving 182

References 184

Chapter 7 – Suggestions for Expat Professional Workers on the Arabian Peninsula 185

Overview 185

Starting Out 186

Greet Everyone 186

Modesty Is Equally Important for Men and Women 187

Stay Formal at Workplaces 187

Ask Questions 188

Understand That “Yes” Does Not Mean Agreement 188

Everything Is a Precedent 189

Do Not Notice When What Was Impossible Becomes Possible (or What Was Done for Years Becomes Impossible) 189

At a Job 190

Keep a Change List 191

Sit in Your Seat 192

Names and Phone Calls 192

Find Your Dumping Ground 193

Find Mercy 193

Find Your Expat Veneer 194

Dissembling 194

Meeting Important People 195

Pay Attention to and Follow Up on Off-Hand Comments 196

Don’t Be Evil 196

Cultural Understandings 197

Power and the Chain of Command 197

Value Honesty 198

Louise Penny as Management Guru 199

Tribes in the Workplace 200

Refinements 201

Judging Behavior 201

Providing Food 201

Making a House Visit 202

Attending a Funeral 203

References 205

Chapter 8 – Suggestions for Teachers on the Arabian Peninsula 207

Overview 207

Arrival and Expectations 209

Research on Teaching 209

Culture and Pedagogy 210

The “Third” Option 211

Cultural Constructions Within High Context Cultures 212

Cultural Constructions of “Power” and “Authority” 213

Cultural Constructions of “Magic Words” 215

Cultural Constructions of “Patience” 216

Cultural Constructions of “Shame” 217

Techniques 218

Understand That Fear May Appear as Anger or Silence 218

Stay in Calm and in Control 219

Check for Understanding 221

Make Statements Instead of Asking Personal Questions 221

Explain Your Reasoning 222

Do Not Fight the Family 223

Do Not Make False Threats 224

Use Distraction 225

Use Humor 226

Stay Realistic—What You Can Control 227

Stay Realistic—Expectations 228

Give Clear Directions 229

What I Had to Rethink 231

Assumption: Students with a Low Level of English Will Be the Hardest to Teach 231

Assumption: Teachers’ Interactions with Students Are Based on Professional Considerations 232

Assumption: You Make Your Choices and You Live with the Consequences 233

Assumption: Try the New 234

Teaching Fiction to Non-literature Majors 235

References 237

Abstract

Researching and Working outlines strategies for current or soon-to-be anthropologists, government employees, business professionals, researchers and teachers to communicate, study and work effectively on the Arabian Peninsula. Using first-person accounts, as well as scholarly research from the fields of anthropology, history, literature, political science and travel writing, this text gives clear advice so long- and short-term visitors can create successful interactions with people from Arabian Peninsula societies. By discussing how the practicalities of work and research intersect with cultural norms, this book fills the gap between guides aimed at the casual tourists and academic texts on narrowly defined topics. The author has lived and taught on the Arabian Peninsula for more than 20 years and this book is a distillation of observations, academic research and longstanding, deep involvement with local communities in southern Arabia.

Chapter 1 – Situating Work and Research on the Arabian Peninsula

Chapter 1 begins by discussing the audience and scope of the book. It then delves into the questions of who is “local” on the Arabian Peninsula and who speaks for whom? Next there is a brief overview of the author’s background and work in the United Arab Emirates and Oman. Lastly, the author gives several extended examples of research and teaching to highlight elements of cross-cultural communication and confusion.

Chapter 2 – Literature Review

Chapter 2 is an annotated bibliography of texts from the fields of anthropology, history, literature, political science and travel writing which relate to the Arabian Peninsula. The books and articles are arranged by topic and country for researchers interested to see what kinds of work have been done and for readers looking for more in-depth information. There are also short essays on the importance of changing your ideas and acknowledging when you are wrong while doing research, as well as how to pick a fieldsite. Next the chapter gives a selected bibliography of texts pertaining to specific Arabian Peninsula counties. This is followed by short lists of texts pertaining to reoccurring themes in Arabian Peninsula research: Islam, Partner studies, Labor/ Migration, Politics/ Power, Social life/ Family, Survive/ Thrive, Tribes and Woman.

Chapter 3 – Before Moving to the Arabian Peninsula

This chapter is for teachers, researchers and business professionals who have not spent significant time on the Arabian Peninsula. It covers basics such as learning the Arabic alphabet, starting to understand Islam and managing Ramadan as a non-Muslim. It also has specific advice on how cope, for example how to deal with the hot weather, the need for using an international bank and how to prepare paperwork. The chapter includes information for how to get in touch with people before arrival and how to plan for happiness in-country. It ends with sections for specifically for business professionals and teachers. For researchers, there is information about how to create a network of acquaintances, integrate with the local community, decide how to present yourself and figure out the way to take notes.

Chapter 4 – Adjusting to Life on the Arabian Peninsula

This chapter covers the nuts and bolts of first steps on the Arabian Peninsula for teachers, researchers and business professionals. For example, it explains that new arrivals are often taken directly from the airport to meet colleagues and/or start house hunting. The chapter sets out necessary adjustments such as the importance of smiling, over-explaining, not lying and learning how to read people. In addition, the chapter addresses topics such as safety/anonymity, movement through public spaces, effective communication and the consequences of working in cultures that are often visual-, not text-based. How friendships, family relations and information brokers are handled on the Arabian Peninsula are also discussed.

Chapter 5 – Key Topics for Researchers on the Arabian Peninsula

This chapter is for researchers and addresses the issues of positionality, tribal structures, clothing, language and gender. The text includes advice on general topics such as coping with exhaustion, handling prejudices and claiming expertise. It also discusses what happens when you love (or hate) the people you talk to, how to keep safe and how to manage payback.

Chapter 6 – Strategies for Research on the Arabian Peninsula

This chapter helps researchers think through specifics. There are sections about how to do interviews, talk about your project, deal with the press, give presentations and keep up connections with interlocutors. It gives suggestions about being the most cautious version of yourself until you are a little settled and not allowing yourself to be set up for public mockery. It covers how to cope with deflection strategies and keep up situational awareness.

Chapter 7 – Suggestions for Expat Professional Workers on the Arabian Peninsula

This chapter is for business professionals and travelers with guidance for how to prepare for the weather and bureaucracy on the Arabian Peninsula. It explains the need for quiet, modest and formal behavior at workplaces, public spaces, cultural locations and homes/hotels/hostels. It explains that a “yes” is not necessarily an agreement and “I can” does not necessarily mean the person has that ability. Further, it clarifies how to create a positive work environment within cultures which often value family-based events (births, weddings, deaths, recovery from illness, etc.) more important than work requirements. It gives details about settling into the work environment with details about power structures, the value of honesty, how to behave with important people and the importance of having an expat veneer.

Chapter 8 – Suggestions for Teachers on the Arabian Peninsula

This chapter is for teachers and covers how to set achievable expectations for classroom management and workplace behaviors. The focus is on how meanings of words such as “power,” “authority,” “patience” and “shame” carry specific, and possibly new meanings, within high context cultures on the Arabian Peninsula. The chapter sets out techniques to create a positive classroom atmosphere, check for understandings, stay realistic and use distraction. Lastly, the text explains the concept of the “third way,” meaning a combination of the teacher’s pedagogical background and local expectations within a classroom can create a space for win-win interactions between students and teachers.

Practicalities: Managing a Short Research Trip to the Arabian Peninsula

Practicalities: Managing a Short Business Trip to the Arabian Peninsula

Ethnography – Whatever You Do, Don’t Smile, part 2 of Discussing Photographs

Practicalities of Moving to the Arabian Peninsula: How to Sit, Not Wear Shoes and Use Your Hands

How NOT to Describe People Who Are Foreign to You: Exoticizing Omanis

A recent article in a major English-language newspaper about the Dhofar region of Oman included the sentence:

They [Omanis] are immensely private, with women rarely leaving the home and men going about their work in tribal clothes with elaborate head wraps, rifles and decorative daggers known as khanjars.

I taught at a university in the Dhofar region for 19 years, returning to the States 3 months ago. This text is not only similar to many travel articles, it is similar to books written in the early 1900s in which Omanis were portrayed as primitive and exotic.

There are a couple of layers to the above quote. One is that Dhofari women do leave the home. They might be a pharmacist, a teacher, a small-business owner or a director within a large organization. They might work in a law office, a restaurant, an airline or a company that leads tours for foreigners. Their work might also be taking care of goats, cultivating plants, gathering shellfish, designing clothes, taking photographs at events or making perfumes. These are some of the jobs that my female Dhofari friends have; I also have female friends who are studying for graduate degrees.

And they leave the house for the social work of connecting with and supporting family members by visiting new mothers and the newly wed, relatives who are not feeling well, elderly family members, those who are mourning and those who are celebrating.

Lastly, “rarely leaving the home” when writing about Muslim, tribal women usually carries the implied meaning of “not allowed to leave.” Thus, a woman who stays home might be viewed as inactive, isolated, not earning money and/or unhappy. However, homes in Oman are frequently multi-generational with over 30 family members living together. In addition, homes of relatives are often located close to each other so that people can walk short distances to see parents, siblings, cousins, etc.

The Dhofari women I know who don’t study or have conventional employment have options. They might be the social lynch pin for their family by acting as primary care-giver for a disabled relative, running a day-care for their nieces, nephews and neighbors’ children or being responsible for not only all the meals in the house, but also for feeding impoverished neighbors and/ or relatives. Or they might learn foreign languages, do the floor-plan for the new family house, run a web-site devoted to reading and culture, or create an Instagram business that centers on food, beauty, fashion or perfume.

I know that a travel writer, excited about a culture that is new to them, might not want to go into all these kinds of details. But when the writer was in Dhofar, they saw dozens, if not hundreds, of women outside the house. Women drive (there are women taxi drivers) and work in hotels, stores and the airport. And the writer saw dozens, if not hundreds, of men who were not carrying guns or knives. Men who herd animals carry a gun for protection from wolves and hyenas; men going to a formal event such as a wedding, wear a khanjar (dagger), belt and shawl as part of standard ceremonial attire.

Why write something that was constantly disproved by observation? And if the writer was told this information, I think that journalists should ask themselves when interviewing a person: What is this person getting in return?

A journalist/ writer is getting good copy when they conduct an interview. They are gathering quotes to weave into their story which they plan to publish, hoping their words will be read, discussed, cited and passed on. But the interviewee is also thinking of the future – they want their words to be read and they may be speaking to create or counteract opinions.

Several times when I was doing research an Omani interviewee would make a statement and then remark how they were speaking through me to an intended audience. For example, when talking to Dhofari men about driving their female kin to visit relatives, one said, “I know you [Americans] think we are not good with our women.”

An Omani saying “women [are] rarely leaving the home” might be talking through the journalist to represent the area in a certain way. Again, a casual visitor might not know all these kinds of details but the solution is simple: avoid blanket statements by adding modifiers: “some women” and “some men.” Another way to avoid this kind of overgeneralization is to ask Omanis and/ or people familiar with the area to double-check the article before publication

To me, the above quote sounds like “zoo mode,” i.e., let’s talk about these perfectly normal people as though they were exotic animals. When a person in Cambridge, MA wears a scarf because it is cold, am I going to talk about “elaborate head wraps”? No. Dhofari men wear scarves that are as exotic and take as much time to put on as my L.L. Bean scarf.

Why write that Dhofaris have “tribal clothes”? Why not simply explain what they are wearing? Every culture has tribal clothes. I work in Cambridge where the tribal clothes are khakis with button-down shirts and everyone is carrying their SPECIAL, SACRED, TRIBAL OBJECT: a waterbottle.

(Minor point – the article includes a photo with the caption “The beaches can get busy in the khareef [monsoon] season.” The photo was not taken during the khareef season because the ocean is quiet; there are no waves. In the khareef season, there are high waves for over two months.)

my essay about “zoo mode” – Reflections on Ethnographic Research: Changes within Cultures

a discussion of “zoo mode” in travel books from the 1890s-1950s (from Annotated Bibliography of Texts Pertaining to the Dhofar Region of Oman)

Theodore and Mabel had already explored in Italy, Greece, Bahrain, South Africa, Ethiopia, Sudan and Yemen when they arrived in Oman. Their trip to Dhofar began when they left “Maskat” (Muscat) December 17th, 1894 and traveled by ship south along the coast, arriving in Mirbat on January 20. They left the Dhofar region from Al Hafa (part of modern day Salalah) on January 23, 1894. They traveled along the coast and a short distance in the mountains in the late 1800s; I believe they are the first Westerners to visit the Dhofar mountains to write a description of it.

Although James and Mabel Bent were not in the employ of the British government, they were quintessential Victorian age travelers who, in their writing, specifically support British imperialism in their  Southern Arabia (1900/ 2005).[5] The book, written by Mabel after Theodore died soon after they returned to England from Oman, viewed all landscapes through the perspective of how the land might be useful to the Empire:

If this tract of country comes into the hands of a civilizing nation, it will be capable of great and useful development…and a health resort for the inhabitants [i.e. British inhabitants] of the burnt-up centers of Arabian commerce, Aden and Maskat (274).

The Gibalis, here referred to as Qara, traveling with the Bents, however, saw the Bents as equals. The Qara men she traveled with always addressed her, to her anger, only as “Mabel” (with the prefix when calling a person “ya,” i.e., Ya Mabel!) and informed the Bents that “they did not wish us to give them orders of any kind as they were sheikhs” and “We are gentleman” (258, 266). The mountain people of Dhofar, Mabel Bent writes, are “endowed with a spirit of independence which makes him resent the slightest approach to legal supervision…They would not march longer than they liked; they would only take us where they wished… and if we asked them not to sing at night and disturb our rest, they always set to work with greater vigor” (248).

But she does include a fair amount of real information, taking the time for example to explain how indigo is used to dye clothes (145).  She describes the scenery with careful attention to plants, rock formations, distances, etc. (e.g., Wadi Ghersid, 256; Wadi Nahast, 265) and, noticing that the language spoken in the “Gara” [Qara] mountains was not a dialect, she includes a few words (275). Some of her information is still current. She mentions, for example, that oaths “to divorce a favorite wife, are really good” (180) and the technique of cooking on stones (250) which I have seen practiced several times.

The Bents eventually stop struggling to control and “we gave up any attempt to guide our own footsteps, but left ourselves entirely in his [Sheik Sehel] hands, to take us whether he would and spend as long about it as he liked” (257) but her summation is typical of British Victorian-era travelers: “we had discovered a real Paradise in the wilderness, which will be a rich prize for the civilized nation which is enterprising enough to appropriate it” (276).

A geologist who traveled with Bertram Thomas on a short visit to Dhofar in the 19020s writes

Regarding the interesting non-Arab tribes, the Mahri and the Gara…They are entirely nomad, and live under the shelter of trees or caves. They have no cultivation, but live on the produce of large herds of cattle and some camels. I found them always very friendly, and on several occasions I was persuaded to partake of a meal with them…Their diet consists exclusively of meat and milk products. Firearms are very scare among these tribes, instead they are armed with very poor quality swords and small shields of wood or shark-skin. They are also very adept at throwing a short pointed stick. (Lees 1928 456, 457).

As the title suggests, Bertram Thomas’s Arabia Felix Across the Empty Quarter of Arabia (1932) is happy book which details his famous first crossing of the Empty Quarter starting from Salalah. He begins the book with a general history told with imperialistic British moralizing judgment, i.e., “for where treachery is a habit of mind, men are actuated by the stern necessities of the moment, not by any principles of morality.” As the Bents discovered, Thomas asserts that “A European who would travel happily must be prepared to adapt himself to their standards” but “[o]ften I found myself the only member of my party in the saddle, while the others walked for long hours to spare their mounts” (192, 176).  The main differences between Thomas and the Bents is that he traveled later, (he arrived in Salalah October 8th, 1930), did longer and more difficult journeys and was more interested in recording the Omanis’ speech and habits.

Many of the details he sets out are still prevalent as with the cushions hard as “medicine balls” in “bright scarlet or emerald-colored trappings” (17), the description of a dance (34), food preparation (e.g., making bread 166) and the list of shrines (85). He notices that men in the mountains do not eat chicken, a habit that is still followed by older men from the mountain tribes (59). Thomas tells the story of killing a chameleon brought in by an old man who then exclaims “it is treachery. I found it [the animal] innocent in a bush and it came along with me trusting and this is what I consent to happen to it” (63). I see exactly the same framework of not killing an animal being used by the Gibali men I know, to the point of a man not killing a scorpion which has stung him.

Thomas and Thesiger are divided by the Second World War. Thesiger traveled through present day Oman, Yemen and the United Arab Emirates between 1946 and 1950. In addition to Arabian Sands (1959), he published many articles on his travels (1946, 1948, 1949, 1950). Thesiger marks a break with the previous writers as he is neither an accidental traveler (like the shipwreck narratives) nor is he traveling for imperial benefits (anchorage/ supply depots) or even to collect knowledge for knowledge’s sake, but for personal interest and personal challenge.

Thesiger, like Thomas, crossed the Rub al Khali but he spent more time with his guides and was far more interested in their lives than Thomas. In talking about Dhofar, he mentions the traditional dark blue cloth (45), mountain honey for costal sardine trade (49), and throwing sticks (49) that are evident in the Bents’ and Thomas’ description, but he goes farther than any of them in explaining both his point of view and the point of view of his companions.

Thomas reports that “each of my companions not only knew at a glance the footmarks of every camel and man of my caravan, but claimed to know those of his absent tribe, and not a few of his enemies” (178). Thesiger gives the same information but includes specific examples (e.g., 122). Thomas notes that “where food or water were short, no one of them would think of not sharing it equally with his companions, and if anyone was away, perhaps tending his camels, all would wait his return to eat together” (157); this is an accurate description (still in practice today) but he did not ‘live’ this as Thesiger did, sitting thirsty and impatient for the others to come (65).

After Thesiger, the next travel writer is Jan (then James) Morris’ journey with Sultan Said bin Taymur from Salalah to the north of Oman in 1956 as described in Sultan in Oman (1957/ 2008). Whereas Dhofaris are discussed with accuracy and respect by Thesiger, Morris lets loose with insults as demeaning as the Bents. It is rather a surprise, after the gradually lowering racist/ condescending tone seen in the arc from the Bents through Thomas to Thesiger, to read her smug, complacent, and judgmental book.

She begins by widely overstating her achievement, declaring that she undertook “The last classic journeys of the Arabian Peninsula,” as if being driven in a jeep from Salalah to Muscat in 1956 was on par with Dougherty or Philby (1). To drive home the (moribund) English tradition, she notes that “Curzon and Gertrude Bell rose with us approvingly” (2).

She describes Gibalis as

tribes of strange non-Arab people…with their poor clothes, their indigo-stained faces, their immemorial prejudices. [In the monsoon season] the plain was full of these queer Stone Age figures, lean and handsome, and they wandered like fauns through the little marketplaces of Salala. (22)

They have “shaggy,” “strange” and “fuzzy” hair and practice “obscure rituals, taboos, and prejudices” (30, 39, 31). In keeping with the general tone of relegating the inhabitants to prehistoric times, there is no mention of guns. The people “hurl in the general direction of their neighbors the heavy throwing sticks (less scientific than boomerangs) with which they were sometimes quaintly armed” (40). It is clear than even in Thomas’ accounts, much less Thesiger, that the men of this region had access to and knowledge of guns. In fact, the cover of one edition is one of Thesiger’s photos showing Bin Ghabaisha holding a rifle.

The descriptions illuminate more about Morris’ travels than Oman, i.e., Risut is “Like a bay in Cornwall or northern California” (20). “The deeper we penetrated into these Qara foothills, the more lifeless and unearthly the country seemed… It was like an empty Lebanon;” the “abyss of Dahaq” is compared to “Boulder or Grand Coulee” and the Qara mountains “felt like England without the churches, or Kentucky without the white palings” (27, 27, 38). A small lake is “‘Better than the Backs,’ said my companion, ‘not so many undergraduates’” which only makes sense if the reader knows this is a term referring to the place where several Cambridge colleges back onto the River Cam (30).

Travel books about Dhofar from the 1980s onwards

Rory Allen’s Oman: Under Arabian Skies (2010) focus almost exclusively on the authors’ feelings, and when describing Omanis, the prose turns a distinct shade of orientalist purple, as in:

There is a sense of lawlessness [with the Bedu of Sharqiyah]…this anarchy gives one a sense of freedom and of a being without constraint. Rousseau’s “Noble Savage” comes to mind when looking at these Bedu, and they are noble and have not lost that primitive force inside. In Jungian terms their primitive psyche remains intact, that primeval power and urge that makes the Bedu so strong, so essential, individual, intuitive and spontaneous and above all it makes him so vital and impossible to control or rein in. This makes him the free spirit that down deep we all want to be. (Allen 2010 61)

There are several books by travelers or ex-pats about Oman which include a chapter or two about a weekend or short vacation in Dhofar. One of the first, and worst, examples is Suzanne St Albans, who visited in the late 1970s and wrote Where Time Stood Still: A Portrait of Oman (1980). Reminiscent of Jan Morris, she says of Gibalis that “certain freakish customs still linger on among the more primitive tribes” and gives “witchcraft murders” as an example (25). The Jibalis are “wild savages” who “refuse to be absorbed, disciplined or even understood” (153).  She refers to them as “primitive aborigines in the Qara [Mountains]” and “grand, pastoral, cave-dwelling noblemen have never worked with their hands” (152).[10] How would “primitive” people living in caves and herding flocks have survived if they had “never worked with their hands”?

Her writing creates a vision of an ancient, primitive people which erases the reality of the Dhofar region in the late 1970s. St Albans only carefully describes the life of a small percentage of the inhabitants, living in caves and rough dwellings in the mountains. She discusses “witch doctors” but not the many mosques or daily religious practices of Dhofaris (154). In Salalah at this time there was an airport, Holiday Inn, “shops and offices and ultra-modern television centre” and hospital (180) but she never shows Omanis interacting in/ working in these modern surroundings. The “comfortable seaside bungalow” she stays in is owned by British ex-pats who are described but when visiting the “model farm” she discusses the cows; there is no reference to Omanis who work there (163, 164).

Her account of the Dhofar War (1965-1975) shows sympathy only for the British soldiers who fought on the side of the government, which makes sense given that the first ‘thank you’ in her Acknowledgements section is to Brigadier Peter Thwaites. The second is “The Sultan’s Armed Forces provided transport where I wanted to go” (ix). Most of the other people mentioned are also British and military.

Musallim bin Nafl, the first leader of this revolution, is dismissed by the Duchess as “a useless loafer” and a “shiftless, bitter, dissatisfied layabout” but when she visits mountain villages she is appalled at the conditions (155, 156). She never connects the revolution encouraged by Musallim and the desperate poverty endured by his people. The difficulties of daily life she herself witnessed encouraged the mountain people to fight against their government which denied them the basic amenities of modern life such as schools and electricity.

Maria Dekeersmaeker’s The DNA of Salalah, Dhofar: A Tourist Guide (2011) is a guide just for the Dhofar region but it is unfortunately confusing with sentences such as “Horizontalism and parrellism are the trends in urban development of Salalah city. Off roads are the guidelines to the Rub al Khali Desert, the Dhofar Mountain Range and the coastal plains” (153).

The non sequiturs make the book difficult to read. The first section is called “In the Footsteps of the Sultan.” One sub-section entitled “Beloved Mother” about the Sultan’s mother starts with a discussion of falaj, water channels (32). The sub-section “Renaissance Landmarks Education” includes several paragraphs about football (soccer) stadiums and clubs in Salalah (34). The sub-section “Landscape Architecture” is about the Salalah Port and the next sub-section, “The European Connection,” is about the cement factory.

Her discussion of modern Dhofaris makes misleading mistakes to highlight the exoticness, i.e. “real Dhofar men wear a skirt and a t-shirt” (163) with a focus on the rural/ pre-modern. She divides Dhofaris into three groups (Bedu, Jebali and Hadr) and then describes their lives in terms of what animals they take care, as if in 2010 all three groups only herded animals and fished (55-56).